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10．假定你是班长李华，打算为本班的加拿大交换生Wendy举办18岁生日聚会，请用英语给她写一封电子邮件，告知她聚会的时间、地点、参加人员以及活动安排，并征求她的意见．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Wendy，
We're so happy to know your 18th birthday is approaching．Considering you're alone here in China，we're going to hold a party for you to celebrate it．（高分句型一）
The party will be held in the restaurant just next to our school at 6：00 this Saturday afternoon．Twenty of our classmates，together with five teachers，will join．（高分句型二）At the party，there'll be a special ceremony，followed by dinner，drinking，singing，dancing and so on．We've ordered delicious food and a birthday cake and prepared gifts for you．（高分句型三）
Is there any special activity you'd like to have at the party？If any idea strikes you，please let us know．We sincerely hope you'll turn up and have a nice birthday．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是班长李华，打算为本班的加拿大交换生Wendy举办18岁生日聚会，请用英语给她写一封电子邮件，告知她聚会的时间、地点、参加人员以及活动安排，并征求她的意见．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Considering考虑到，鉴于；next to靠近，接近；together with和…一起；turn up出现；Look forward to盼望；
Considering you're alone here in China，we're going to hold a party for you to celebrate it．（高分句型一）
Twenty of our classmates，together with five teachers，will join．（高分句型二）
We've ordered delicious food and a birthday cake and prepared gifts for you．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Wendy，
       We're so happy to know your 18th birthday is approaching．Considering you're alone here in China，we're going to hold a party for you to celebrate it．（高分句型一）
       The party will be held in the restaurant just next to our school at 6：00 this Saturday afternoon．Twenty of our classmates，together with five teachers，will join．（高分句型二）At the party，there'll be a special ceremony，followed by dinner，drinking，singing，dancing and so on．We've ordered delicious food and a birthday cake and prepared gifts for you．（高分句型三）
       Is there any special activity you'd like to have at the party？If any idea strikes you，please let us know．We sincerely hope you'll turn up and have a nice birthday．
       Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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