Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A ) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后

I的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Patience is of great important in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past,but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed,I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute,I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus,I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possibly waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience,I’ll think of this experience.

Answer 1

  Patience is of great important in our daily life. Once I wai-importance ted A a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past,but no bus for passed came. Both upset and annoyed,I decided to walk on feet. But no foot sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited than for one more minute,I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus,I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only the another then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possibly waste did all the effort that we have put、in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience* I'll think of this experience,losing in.