Question

8．现在，许多中学生做作业时经常上网搜索答案，《21世纪报》就此话题展开征文比赛，请你根据以下表格内容写一篇英语文章，向报社投稿．

1．Reasons	pressure； homework…
2．Advantages	save time； solve problems…
3．Disadvantages	lose the ability； …
4．Opinions and suggestions	…

注意：1．内容应包括表格中列出的要点；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数100左右；
3．开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
   Nowadays，many students often go on line to search for answers to their homework．
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Answer 1

分析 题目属于表格类材料作文．题目要求根据表格所给信息写一篇英语文章，作文应涵盖所有要点．第一部分叙述出现这种情况的原因，第二部分写有点和缺点；第三部分给出自己的观点和建议．写作时使用第一人称，注意标点、拼写、时态、语态和语法知识的正确使用．注意作文的条理性，内容要充实，描述现象要客观．注意词数限制．
亮点说明：范文注意使用Nowadays，Worse still，As a result，However，To start with，Besides，In my opinion，For example，Meanwhile等来衔接上下文，很好地做到了语意连贯、衔接紧凑；范文使用To start with，Besides进行列举，比firstly，secondly更有新意；
范文使用了较多短语和固定搭配：search for，turn to the Internet for help，depend heavily on the Internet，realize the importance of finishing homework independently，try to，build up，communicate with等，使文章内容充实；
范文使用了一些重要的语法知识：表语从句That is because students are under heavy pressure of study；固定句型too difficult to solve，find it convenient to surf the Internet for accurate answers，not only the ability to solve problems but also their interest in study；定语从句which saves them a lot of time；非谓语动词asking them to reduce the amount of homework等，语法知识掌握很扎实；
measures should be taken to solve the problem这句是写作常用的好句子，也可以用only when…+倒装来作为结尾．

解答 Nowadays，many students often go on line to search for answers to their homework．That is because students are under heavy pressure of study and they have too much homework to do．（高分句型）Worse still，some of the problems are too difficult to solve．As a result，they turn to the Internet for help．
    There are advantages of searching for answers on the Internet．Most students find it convenient to surf the Internet for accurate answers，which saves them a lot of time and helps them solve difficult problems．（高分句型） However，this also brings some disadvantages．To start with，some students depend heavily on the Internet for answers．Besides，they may lose not only the ability to solve problems but also their interest in study．（高分句型）
    In my opinion，measures should be taken to solve the problem．For example，students should realize the importance of finishing homework independently and try to build up confidence in themselves．Meanwhile，they can communicate with their teachers，asking them to reduce the amount of homework．（高分句型）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．