题目内容
【题目】假如你叫张华,你们的英文校报“English Garden”向你约稿。请结合下列提示,就图书馆的情况给校长写一封信,说明新建的图书馆很漂亮,但存在一些问题。问题包括:1)阅览室的座位少;2)星期六、日不开放;3)无法知道有什么新书可看。最后对反映的问题提出自己的建议。
注意: 1. 词数 120-150; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,内容充实。
Dear schoolmaster,
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】
Dear schoolmaster,
I’m writing to tell you that all of us are nice to see our newly-built library open. It is so beautiful and well-equipped that we all like to make the most of our spare time here. But there is something we should deal with as quickly as possible.
First of all, there aren’t plenty of seats in the reading-room, so we have to stand reading and thus can’t take notes. Besides, the library is closed at weekends, but in fact, we students have more spare time only at weekends to enjoy reading. What’s more, we don’t know what new books are available.
I suggest that our school library provide more seats and be kept open at weekends. Also, a notice should be put up if there are new books available.
I would appreciate a lot if you take that into consideration and take some steps to solve them.
That’s all. Thank you!
Sincerely yours,
Zhang Hua
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇书信写作,根据题目要求,可以分为3部分设计:1.表达写信目的;2.反映问题;3.表达建议。考生在审题的时候应该注意审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。题文已经告知要求,那么文体应为应用文体;又根据“你是张华” 写作时即用第一人称“我”,即张华;时态主要用一般现在时态。考生在写作时应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型,将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识,避开生僻的词汇,并克服母语的干扰,按照英语的习惯方式,用地道的英语表达出来,力求做到语言准确无误。
【亮点说明】本文语言凝练,条理层次清晰。文章总共三段,第一段表达写信目的;第二段反映问题;,最后一段提出建议,适当使用连词连接上下文,如first of all, besides, what’s more等。It is so beautiful and well-equipped that we all like to make the most of our spare time here. 使用了so...that...句型;there is something we should deal with as quickly as possible.定语从句; we have to stand reading非谓语动词;I suggest that our school library provide more seats and be kept open at weekends.虚拟语气的使用以及被动语态a notice should be put up if there are new books available.