Question

【题目】假如你是高一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Mr Wu希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。

1.对英语学习的认识； 2.自己英语学习存在的主要问题；

3.对英语教学的两点建议。

注意：1.词数100左右； 2.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr Wu，

I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher. ______________________________________________

yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Wu，

I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.

With your help, I have got a brand new understanding of English study. As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English well means we can see the world through a new window.

My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. As a result, I’m not as active as other students in English class.

I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. And What’s more, give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.

Thank you!

yours

Li Hu

【解析】

试图分析：教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。1.对英语学习的认识；2.自己英语学习存在的主要问题；3.对英语教学的两点建议。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1.词数100左右； 2.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇英文书信，格式正确，内容齐全，布局合理，使用高级句子。As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, As引导原因状语从句；mastering English well means we can see the world through a new window.动名词作主语；the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，and that I often feel nervous when speaking English.两个并列的表语从句；I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.运用宾语从句；另外，With your help, As a result, What’s more,的运用为文章增色添彩。