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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

About two years ago, I worked hard and entered a locally key school, which my parents were proud of it. From then up, I got up early and got to the school on time. After school, I went back home in time to help my parents do some housework while enjoy some light music. However, one day my mother persuading me to live at school to learn to be independent, preparing the future life. As I was unhappy, I understood my parents and follow their advice. Before living at school, I found it helped me save time and learn what to get on with others.

【答案】1.locally→ local

2.去掉it

3.up→ on

4.enjoy→ enjoying

5.persuading→ persuaded

.preparing后加for

7.As→ Though/Although

8.follow→ followed

9.before→ after

10.what→ how

【解析】考查形容词。修饰名词用形容词作定语,local修饰名词school作定语。故将locally改为local。

考查定语从句。“which my parents were proud of”是定语从句,which指代整个主句,在从句中做介词of的宾语,故it多余。故去掉of后的it。

考查副词。from then on“从那时起”是固定短语。故将up改为on。

考查非谓语动词。while引导时间状语从句,在状语从句中,如果主从句主语一致,从句中含有be动词形式,从句省略主语与be动词形式,故while enjoying相当于while I was enjoying,省略主语Iwas。故填enjoying。

考查动词。persuade是谓语从句,由“one day”可推断,句子讲述过去发生的事情用一般过去时。故将persuading改为persuaded。

考查介词。句意:然而,一天我妈妈说服我住校学习独立,为未来的生活做准备。prepare“准备……”;prepare for“为……做准备”。故prepare后加for。

考查连词。句意:尽管我不高兴,但是我理解我的父母听从他们的建议。根据语境可知,此处是让步状语从句,as引导让步状语从句必须倒装故将As改为Though/Although/While.

考查名词。advice是不可数名词。故将advices改为advice。

考查连词。句意:住校以后,我发现它有助于我省出时间来学习与别人如何相处。根据语境,故将Before改为After。

考查连词。what作主语、宾语和表语,to get on with others不成分齐全,how是副词作状语,修饰get on with others。故将what改为how。

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【题目】请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

The 18-year-old girl from Linyi, Shandong province scored 568 points on her college entrance exam this year and was admitted to Nanjing University of Posts and Telecommunications.

On Aug 19, Xu received a phone call from an unknown person telling her that she was due to receive student funding. Following the call, Xu transferred a 9,900-yuan "activation fee" into the man’s bank account, hoping the money would appear in her student account, but it never did.

After discovering they had been cheated, the family immediately reported the incident to the police, but Xu was said to be frustrated. On their way home, she suddenly fainted and despite doctors’ best efforts to rescue her, she passed away.

The death of Xu yuyu immediately caused an outcry over the society, and once again, it fired a public anger towards those who commit heartless fraud(欺诈).

So how was Xu’s private information leaked out?

Reporters have discovered that there are many people who openly sell the examinee’s information online. The information includes the examinee’s name, school, phone number, and address. The personal information of examinee has become the target of the online fraud industry.

【写作内容】

1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要;

2. 用约120个词就“Personal information leakage”谈谈你的看法和感受,内容包括:

(1)简述个人信息泄露的危害及保护个人信息的重要性;

(2)就如何保护个人信息提几点建议(至少两点)。

【写作要求】

1. 阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等。

【评分标准】

内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

【题目】Everyone can benefit a lot from reading books. The following is about the various benefits of reading books.

1Whenever you read something, you learn information that you otherwise wouldn’t have known. It can be a fact about history or a theory you didn’t know existed. If you want to learn new words, reading books is a great way to enlarge your vocabulary.

2Similar to solving puzzles, reading books allows your mind to practice its processing skills. Going without books for too long will turn your mind into a whirl(混乱).

One of the primary benefits of reading books is its ability to develop your critical thinking skills.3Wherever you are faced with a similar problem in real life, your mind is able to put its mystery-solving skills to a test.

One of the real benefits of reading books is that the information in it can be accessed over and over again. For example, reading a cookbook allows you the luxury of reviewing the procedures whenever you need to.4Don’t even think about writing the information down because you may lose the paper you wrote down on sooner or later.

These are just some of the wonderful benefits of reading books.5If you can’t even go outside, you can download free e-books on line and read them on your computer. That way, you can set how advantageous reading can be for yourself.

A. Reading books keeps your mind active

B. You can improve your memory by reading

C. Reading books provides you with new knowledge

D. Following a recipe from a cooking show will be difficult

E. Reading mystery novels, for example, sharpens your mind

F. Reading keeps your mind in good condition

G. Why don’t you drop by the bookstore or library and pick a book up

【题目】My father was always a good gardener. One of my earliest memories is standing without shoes in the freshly tilled (翻耕的) soil, my hands blackened from digging in the ground.

As a child, I loved following Dad around in the garden. I remember Dad pushing the tiller (耕作机) ahead in perfectly straight lines. Dad loved growing all sorts of things: yellow and green onions,watermelons almost as big as me, rows of yellow com, and our favorite—red tomatoes.

As I grew into a teenager, I didn’t get so excited about gardening with Dad. Instead of magical land of possibility, it had turned into some kind of prison. As Dad grew older, his love for gardening never disappeared. After all the kids were grown and had started families of their own, Dad turned to gardening like never before. Even when he was diagnosed with cancer, he still took care of his garden.

But then, the cancer, bit by bit, invaded his body. I had to do the things he used to do. What really convinced me that Dad was dying was the state of his garden that year. The rows and rows of multicolored vegetables were gone. Too tired to weed them, he simply let them be.

For the first few years after he died, I couldn’t even bear to look at anyone’s garden without having strong memories pour over me like cold water from a bucket. Three years ago, I decided to plant my own garden and started out with just a few tomatoes. That morning, after breaking up a fair amount of soil, something caught the comer of my eye and I had to smile. It was my eight-year-old son Nathan, happily playing in the freshly tilled soil.

1Why did the author like the garden when he was a child?

A. He wanted to be a garden-crazy like his father.

B. He loved being in the garden with his father.

C. The garden was full of his favorite food.

D. The garden was just freshly tilled.

2When all the kids started their own families,the author’s father .

A. stopped his gardening

B. turned to other hobbies

C. devoted more to gardening

D. focused on planting tomatoes

3What happened to the garden when the author’s father was seriously ill?

A. There was a great harvest.

B. The garden was almost deserted.

C. No plant grew in the garden at all.

D. The author’s son took charge of the garden.

4Why did the author start his garden with tomatoes?

A. He wanted to honor his father.

B. His son liked the fields of tomatoes.

C. He only knew how to grow tomatoes.

D. He thought tomatoes were easy to manage.

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