Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

About two years ago, I worked hard and entered a locally key school, which my parents were proud of it. From then up, I got up early and got to the school on time. After school, I went back home in time to help my parents do some housework while enjoy some light music. However, one day my mother persuading me to live at school to learn to be independent, preparing the future life. As I was unhappy, I understood my parents and follow their advice. Before living at school, I found it helped me save time and learn what to get on with others.

Answer 1

【答案】1.locally→ local

2.去掉it

3.up→ on

4.enjoy→ enjoying

5.persuading→ persuaded

.preparing后加for

7.As→ Though/Although

8.follow→ followed

9.before→ after

10.what→ how

【解析】考查形容词。修饰名词用形容词作定语，local修饰名词school作定语。故将locally改为local。

考查定语从句。“which my parents were proud of”是定语从句，which指代整个主句，在从句中做介词of的宾语，故it多余。故去掉of后的it。

考查副词。from then on“从那时起”是固定短语。故将up改为on。

考查非谓语动词。while引导时间状语从句，在状语从句中，如果主从句主语一致，从句中含有be动词形式，从句省略主语与be动词形式，故while enjoying相当于while I was enjoying，省略主语I和was。故填enjoying。

考查动词。persuade是谓语从句，由“one day”可推断，句子讲述过去发生的事情用一般过去时。故将persuading改为persuaded。

考查介词。句意：然而，一天我妈妈说服我住校学习独立，为未来的生活做准备。prepare“准备……”；prepare for“为……做准备”。故prepare后加for。

考查连词。句意：尽管我不高兴，但是我理解我的父母，听从他们的建议。根据语境可知，此处是让步状语从句，as引导让步状语从句必须倒装。故将As改为Though/Although/While.

考查名词。advice是不可数名词。故将advices改为advice。

考查连词。句意：住校以后，我发现它有助于我省出时间来学习与别人如何相处。根据语境，故将Before改为After。

考查连词。what作主语、宾语和表语，to get on with others不成分齐全，how是副词作状语，修饰get on with others。故将what改为how。