Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你们学校打算办一份英语海报，现学校网站向全校师生就报纸内容公开征求意见和建议。请你给筹办负责人外教Mr.Brown 写一封电子邮件，谈谈你的想法和理由。

注意：1.可以适当增添细节以使行文连贯。

2.词数100左右（格式已给出不计入总词数）。

Dear Mr.Brown,

I’m glad to hear that an English newspaper is to be started in our school.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,

I'm glad to hear that an English newspaper is to be started in our school. Now, I'd like to give you some suggestions.

Personally, I hold that the content of the newspaper should be colorful, including the introduction of learning methods as well as materials connected to our lessons. For example, the newspaper can regularly provide different articles on western culture and custom, which will surely help us know more about the outside world, thus broadening our horizon. In addition, it would be better to set a special column where we can express our feelings and emotions. We really need such a place to release our pressure freely and meanwhile practice expressing ourselves in English.

I truly hope that you can take my suggestions into full consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇应用文中的书信的写作。要求给外教老师写信寻求有关英语海报内容的建议和意见，并谈谈自己的想法和理由。首先要仔细审题，阅读所给提示，确定时态和人称，本文应使用一般现在时，第一人称。然后根据提示确定写作要点，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。本文是一篇寻求建议的书信，注意语气要诚恳，用词要委婉礼貌。最后写作时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，合适的词汇和句型，高级词汇和固定短语的灵活运用会给文章添彩。

【范文亮点点评】

Now, I'd like to give you some suggestions.简洁明了的开头，点明写信目的。

Personally, I hold that the content of the newspaper should be colorful, including the introduction of learning methods as well as materials connected to our lessons.评注性副词Personally使用恰当，宾语从句，介词短语增强了句子的可读性。

…which will surely help us know more about the outside world, thus broadening our horizon.使用了非限制性定语从句。

In addition, it would be better to set a special column where we can express our feelings and emotions.使用了过渡词in addition增强了文章的连贯性，形式主语it使用符合句子规律。