题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,高考后想出国留学,但担心不适应国外生活,请给外籍教师Peter写一封信,告诉他你的担忧,请他介绍美国大学生的学习和生活并给出相关建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
How is everything going these days?I am Li Hua,one of your students who will graduate from high school this summer and going abroad for further study is my first choice.However,I do have some worries,which brings to the reason for my letter.
Studying abroad will surely benefit me in the long run.But on thinking that I will be exposed to a completely unfamiliar environment with no family or friends to turn to,I can't help feeling nervous.So now I am eager to know what real American college life is and what problems foreign students may come across at the beginning.Besides, though I have made a lot of preparations for language.I am still afraid that I might have difficulties in communicating with others in English.Could you please offer me some advice on it?
I hope my silly questions will not bother you much.With your generous help,I believe I will be better prepared for my college life.Thanks for your time and I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是书信类作文,李华高考后想出国留学,但担心不适应国外生活,于是给外籍教师Peter写信请求介绍美国大学生的学习和生活并给出相关建议。此文可分三段来写:
第1段应该写出写信的目的:自己怕不适应国外生活,有许多担忧。
第2段具体的介绍担忧的事情,以及希望外籍教师Peter介绍美国大学生的学习和生活并给出相关建议等等。
第3段,表达自己的愿望和感谢,希望Peter早点回信等等。
在写作的过程中,要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,如强调句,倒装句等,让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如:First,second, Besides, What’s more等,让文章看起来很有条理,也很流畅。另外本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦,力求简洁。
【范文亮点】
1. I am Li Hua, one of your students who will graduate from high school this summer运用了who引导的定语从句。
2. I do have some worries, which brings to the reason for my letter. 运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
3. Studying abroad will surely benefit me in the long run. Studying abroad动名词作主语。
4. I will be exposed to a completely unfamiliar environment with no family or friends to turn to运用with的复合结构
5. 运用了in the long run,be eager to,come across等高级词汇