Question

【题目】书面表达

某英文报社准备刊发一篇题为”Living in a City”有关城市生活利和弊的文章。根据下面提示写一篇英语短文。

优点：找工作容易；交通便利；有公园、饭店等休闲场所。

缺点：生活消费高；人口多，拥挤；空气污染，居住环境差。

要求：1. 覆盖以上全部内容，可适当发挥。

2. 词数100左右，标题已给出。

Living in a City

Answer 1

【答案】

Living in a City

Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages. It is often easier to find work. There are always many choices of public transport. Besides, there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see. You can eat in good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax.

However, living in a city is often very expensive. You must find a well-paid job, otherwise, you will not be able to afford the things you will do. What's more, the city is always crowded, noisy and dirty. It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside.

Anyway, you can make the choice that suits you best.

【解析】

试题分析：某英文报社准备刊发一篇题为”Living in a City”有关城市生活利和弊的文章。根据下面提示写一篇英语短文。优点：找工作容易；交通便利；有公园、饭店等休闲场所。缺点：生活消费高；人口多，拥挤；空气污染，居住环境差。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。要求：1. 覆盖以上全部内容，可适当发挥。2. 词数100左右，标题已给出。

【亮点说明】Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages.动名词短语做主语；It is often easier to find work.动词不定式作真正的主语；Besides, there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see. 动词不定式作定语；You can eat in good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax. Whenever引导的让步状语从句，主句部分运用了并列谓语；you will not be able to afford the things you will do.句中运用定语从句；It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside.句中where引导定语从句；you can make the choice that suits you best.句中使用定语从句；另外，Besides, However, otherwise, What's more, Anyway,的运用尽显层次分明、结构严谨的风采。