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6．第一节 短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    One day when we were playing the basketball，I saw Tim wearing a pair sneakers of my style．I thought they were my shoes，so I shouted angry and blamed him for using my personal possessions without permit．Then I went back to the dorm after he could say anything．I opened the door only to find mine own sneakers just under my bed．For a while，I stood there still，shocking and guilty．When realizing my act must have hurt him，immediately I rush to the court to apology to him sincerely．Fortunately，though he was angry and sad，he pardoned me．With my relief，the conflict ended happily．

分析 本文主要讲述作者看到Tim穿着一双与自己式样相同的运动鞋，就认为Tim穿了自己的，因此对他大吼．作者回到寝室后，发现自己的运动鞋在床下，马上诚挚地向他道歉，化解了一场冲突．

解答 One day when we were playing the basketball，I saw Tim wearing a pair∧sneakers of my style．I thought they were my shoes，so I shouted angry and blamed him for using my personal possessions without permit．Then I went back to the dorm after he could say anything．I opened the door only to find mine own sneakers just under my bed．For a while，I stood there still，shocking and guilty．When realizing my act must have hurt him，immediately I rush to the court to apology to him sincerely．Fortunately，though he was angry and sad，he pardoned me．With my relief，the conflict ended happily．
详解：
1．去掉the 考查冠词．球类名词前不加冠词．
2．加of 考查固定搭配．a pair of意为"一双"，是固定搭配．
3．angry改为angrily 考查副词．shout是动词，要用副词修饰．
4．permit改为permission 考查名词．without是介词，后接名词做其宾语，动词permit的名词是permission．
5．after改为before 考查连词．根据句意：然后他还没说什么我就回到了寝室．before意为"来不及； 尚未…..就…"．
6．mine改为my 考查代词．sneakers是名词，其前用形容词性物主代词作定语．
7．shocking改为shocked 考查过去分词．此处shocked and guilty是形容词作状语．
8．rush改为rushed 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是已发生的事情，用一般过去时态．
9．apology改为apologize 考查词语用法．apology意为"道歉"，是名词，apologize意为"道歉"，是动词．此处应是动词．
10．With改为To 考查固定搭配．to one's relief意为"令某人感到宽慰的是"，是固定搭配．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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    Security
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36．A visitor can apply for a free audio tourC．
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B．in the State Apartments
C．at the Admission Center 
D．at St George's Chapel
37．What is specially offered to visitors with kids？D
A．A security guard．
B．A pushchair．
C．A free toy．
D．A baby carrier．
38．Who can get re-entry permits？A
A．Visitors wishing to eat outside the Castle．
B．Visitors buying gifts in the castle shops．
C．Visitors buying water from the Courtyard．
D．Visitors eating outside St George's Chapel．
39．Why are visitors required to turn off their mobile phone？C
A．To ensure the safety of others．
B．To ensure the security of the Castle．
C．To prevent them from disturbing others．
D．To prevent the use of the built-in cameras．
40．In the last part，a''working royal palace"refers to oneB．
A．still being constructed                       
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C．where the Queen usually works          
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17．A new international study shows that some people's biological clock plays a powerful role for their life expectancy，regardless of lifestyle choices．
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    Geneticist Steve Horvath from the University of California，Los Angeles （UCLA），led a team of 65scientists around the world to record age-related changes to human DNA，analyse blood samples collected from 13，000 people and estimate their lifespan．
    A higher biological age，regardless of actual age，consistently predicts an earlier death，the study says．
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    The findings discovered that 5 percent of the population ages at a faster biological rate，which translated to a roughly 50 percent higher than average risk of death at any age．
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1．第一节短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．短文中有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多于的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（ 从第11处起）不计分．
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11．Directions：Read the following passage．Summarize the main idea and the main point（s） of the passage in no more than 60 words．Use your own words as far as possible．

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I'm Li Hua from Xinghua Middle School．Now I'd like to share my experience in practicing oral English．Firstly，I'm always confident and brave．I seize every opportunity to speak，not afraid of making mistakes which may embarrass me．I also find it of great benefit to take part in English corners，where I make many friends．By talking with them，my oral English has improved a lot．Finally，some English programs like CCTV-9 contribute to the progress in my speaking ability．Through this channel，not only am I kept informed of the current events going on both at home and abroad，but I also learn the standard pronunciation and intonation by repeated imitation．Practice makes perfect，as the saying goes．Our hard work will finally be rewarded．．
17．我没想到他欺骗了我．（occur）It didn't occur to me that he cheated me/took me in．

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