题目内容
【题目】最近,你班将举行以How to live a healthy lifestyle 为主题的英语班会,请你准备一篇100词左右的演讲稿,谈谈在日常生活中我们应该如何养成健康的生活方式。
注意:开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Dear fellow students,
As we all know, good health is very essential to the our daily life and lay the foundation for our future development.
However, in modern times many people don’t live a healthy lifestyle due to different reasons. In my judgement, we should have a balanced diet and play sports regularly to keep physically healthy. Besides, we should take a positive attitude towards people around us so that we can keep mentally healthy. Furthermore, I strongly advise that we should never sit too long in front of a computer beacuse it is bad for our health.
I hope all of us can live healthily and happily.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】本文是一篇演讲稿,文章要求谈谈在日常生活中我们应该怎样养成健康的生活方式。考生在成文时应注意:合理发挥想象力,注意增加细节,使文章的表达自然,丰满。文章的写作要点要包括:1. 健康的重要性…2. 我们的不健康的生活方式…3. 我的愿望和建议…注意文章的人称:以第一人称为主。时态:一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇due to,In my judgement,take a positive attitude towards,和句型,以提高文章的档次;恰当使用一些连词However、Besides, Furthermore,插入语,使文章表达自然,流畅。注意次数:80—120之间。
【范文亮点】本文结构明确,思路清晰。分三段把内容要点都涵盖了,同时注意应用了较高级的短语和句式,为文章增色不少,①As we all know, good health is very essential to the our daily life定语从句。②I strongly advise that we should never sit too long in front of a computer beacuse it is bad for our health..虚拟语气。