假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Looking after animals can help children learn that animals have needs similarly to their own. In addition,there is evidence that have a pet can reduce stress in people of all age. For example,walking dogs have additional health benefits for both children or parents. Choosing a pet is a decision who needs a great deal of care. Unlike a soft toy,any pet will suffer from if not treated properly. Therefore,children should be taught how to look after an animal and also how to feed and exercise it. Sometimes,pets that look cute can aggressive. tiSufcEP So children shouldn’t disturb them where they are tired or asleep.

1. . .. similarly to their own. similarly→similar

2. . .. have a pet can ... have→ having

3. . .. people of all age. age→ages

4. . .. walking dogs have ... have →has

5. . .. both children or... or→and

6. . .. a decision who ... who →hat / which

7. . .. pet will suffer from ... 去掉 from

8. Sometime,pets that... Sometime→Sometimes

9. …can aggressive. can后加 be

10. …where they are tired … where→ when / if

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These days I have access to over one hundred 6 . However,I often find myself 7 some rerun from my childhood on an old station. On my 8 there are shows,videos,and stories from all over the world. 9 , time and time again I find myself getting 10 . Then I will turn my computer 11 and pick up an old book to read 12 . My daughter has a smartphone that she can use with a skill that makes my head spin(眩晕) . 13 can get any information from the Internet in mere 14 . Still,it seems a bit too fast for me at times. I don't 15 slowly consulting the dictionary or an encyclopedia(百科全书) instead.

Sometimes I think I was bom a little too early for this world,16 one thing that I do 17 is that in this crazy,mixed-up,super-information society you still need to find the 18 direction. You still need to turn your antenna to love. You still need to 19 daily life with kindness. Without these things life has no 20 ; you gain no wisdom and have no joy.

1. A. change B. add C. remember D. use

2. A. always B. rarely C. sometimes D. often

3. A. pick up B. give up C. open up D. put up

4. A. play B. write C. describe D. organize

5. A. strange B. fun C. special D. fast

6. A. channels B. videos C. stories D. shows

7. A. making B. watching C. missing D. reading

8. A. television set B. mobile phone C. computer D. book

9. A. Therefore B. Moreover C. However D. Otherwise

10. A. sleepy B. tired C. lazy D. bored

11. A. on B. off C. up D. down

12. A. instead B. too C. later D. soon

13. A. I B. She C. We D. They

14. A. hours B. days C. seconds D. months

15. A. mind B. like C. avoid D. consider

16. A. so B. but C. if D. when

17. A. forget B. admit C. face D. know

18. A. same B. right C. prepared D. unexpected

19. A. cover B. provide C. compare D. connect

20. A. purpose B. reason C. usage D. meaning

Can animals be made 1. (work) for us? Some scientists think that one day animals may be trained to do a number of simple jobs that 2. (be) now done by human beings.

They point 3. that at a circus,for example,we may see elephants,monkeys,dogs and other animals doing quite skillful things. Perhaps you have seen them on the television or in a film. If you watch 4. (close) , you may notice that the trainer always gives the animal a piece of candy or a piece of fruit 5. a reward. The scientists say that many 6. (differ) animals may be trained to do a number of simple jobs if they know they will get a reward for 7. (do) them.

Of course,as we know,dogs can be used to guard a house,and soldiers in both old and modem times have used geese to give 8. (warn) by making a lot of noise when a stranger or an enemy comes near. And 9. may be possible to train animals to work in factories. In Russia,for example,pigeons,10. are birds with good eyesight,are being used to watch out for faults in small steel balls that are being made in one factory.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

This morning my classmate John was late for class. It was the fifth time that he have been late for class in a week,what made the teacher angry. After the school,I had a talk with John. I said, “It is good manners to be on time for all of your scheduled event. Being on time show you have respect for other people and that you care so much about their time as your own. In fact,all success people,view their time as a precious resource. Valuing others’ time and earning your respect is an important part of your individual reputation." Heard what I said,John made up his mind to be late again.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

While shopping in a store yesterday,I was slightly annoying by somebody’s screaming children,who just would not quiet down. The little boy could be heard throughout the store. He looked for me as I passed his mother and I smiled as I looked back. He said “hi” in quiet and easy tone. I said “hi” back and gave him an even big smile. The boy didn’t smile back but I didn't hear it yelling the rest of the time when I was in the store. It is truly that if you smile at someone,you would brighten their day. In fact,it not only brightens their day,and makes your own light to shine as well.

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2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 短文的开头己给出，不计入总词数。

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3. 询问情况(是否可以只做三个月，有无年龄限制) 。

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