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15.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的一下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
 Last winter holiday I go to the mountains with my cousins.None of us had ever skied before so we had been looking forward it for months.When we arrived at the airports,it started to snow and we were really exciting.But when we got off the plane in the mountains,there were not any snow at all.Everyone here said it was too warm for snow.We went to the bed feeling sadly that we wouldn't be able to ski.But when they got up the next morning and looked out of the window,we realized that it had been snowed all night and we would be able to ski after all.

分析 本文介绍的是:去年寒假,作者与表兄们坐着飞机一起到大山里去经历第一次滑雪的场景.

解答 Last winter holiday I goto the mountains with my cousins.None of us
had ever skied before so we had been looking forward∧it for months.
When we arrived at the airports,it started to snow and we were really
exciting.But when we got off the plane in the mountains,there were
not any snow at all.Everyone here said it was too warm for snow.We
went to the bed feeling sadly that we wouldn't be able to ski.But when
they got up the next morning and looked out of the window,we realized
that it had been snowedall night and we would be able to ski after all.
详解:
1.go改为went   考查时态   根据句中的时间状语"Last winter holiday"可知,本文讲述的是去年寒假发生的事情,应使用一般过去时;故用went.
2.forward后面加to  考查固定短语  look forward to doing意为:盼望/期待着干某事;故在forward后面加to. 
3.airports改为airport   考查名词的单复数   此处指的应是一家机场,故用单数名词airport.
4.exciting改为excited   考查过去分词   此处在句中作表语,说明的是主语we(指人)的情况,故过去分词excited.
5.were改为was    考查时态及there be结构中的主谓一致   根据上文可知,此处描述的是发生在去年寒假的事情,故此处应使用一般过去时;由于be之后为不可数名词snow,故用was.
6.here改为there   考查副词   此处指的是:那里的所有人,故用there.
7.去掉the    考查固定短语   go to bed意为:去睡觉;故去掉bed之前的the.
8.sadly改为sad    考查形容词   此处用在系动词feel之后,应使用形容词形式;故用sad.
9.they改为we   考查句意理解以及人称代词的一致性    根据上文可知,此处在when引导的从句中作主语,指的是"我们",故用we.
10.snowed改为snowing   考查过去完成进行时   由于此处表示的是一直持续到过去某时的一个动作,应使用过去完成进行时,即用"had been+现在分词"结构;故用snowing.

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题,主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力.错误类型一般有:缺词、多词和错词.常见的错误有:1 词法错误,主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此类试题时,需要正确分析句子成分,熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常见句法错误.通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误.解答此类试题时,需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法.3 应在理解文章大意的前提下,进行作答.

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