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3．学生学会做了一个关于中学生睡眠、饮食和休闲等生活习惯的调查，发现学生最常见的不良习惯有：晚上熬夜；不吃早餐上学，常吃方便面；长时间上网聊QQ和玩游戏．请根据以上信息写一篇120个词左右的短文，要求：
1．简述这些坏习惯可能产生的不良影响；
2．呼吁广大中学生培养健康的睡眠、饮食和休闲习惯；
3．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Let's Develop a Healthy Lifestyle
According to a survey among middle school students，many students have the following bad habits：
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分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息学生学会做了一个关于中学生睡眠、饮食和休闲等生活习惯的调查，发现学生最常见的不良习惯有：晚上熬夜；不吃早餐上学，常吃方便面；长时间上网聊QQ和玩游戏，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：简述这些坏习惯可能产生的不良影响；呼吁广大中学生培养健康的睡眠、饮食和休闲习惯；2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：stay up late熬夜；As we know众所周知；instead of 而不是，代替；Actually事实上；
      According to a survey among middle school students，many students have the following bad habits：staying up late into the night；going to school without breakfast and often eating instant noodles；spending much time chatting on QQ playing computer games．（高分句型一）
Going to school without breakfast or eating instant noodles instead of meals will cause a lack of nutrition．（高分句型二）
Actually，there are varieties of activities for us to relax ourselves，such as doing sports or listening to music．（高分句型三）

解答 According to a survey among middle school students，many students have the following bad habits：staying up late into the night；going to school without breakfast and often eating instant noodles；spending much time chatting on QQ playing computer games．（高分句型一）
       As we know，if you often stay up late at night，you will feel tired and sleepy during the daytime and cannot concentrate in classe．Going to school without breakfast or eating instant noodles instead of meals will cause a lack of nutrition．（高分句型二）Spending too much time on QQ or computer games will do harm to your eyes．
      In terms of study and health，we should develop a healthy lifestyle．First，go to bed a bit earlier instead of staying up late．Second，keep a balanced diet to build up our bodies．Third，don't spend too much time on the Internet．Actually，there are varieties of activities for us to relax ourselves，such as doing sports or listening to music．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．