题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设你是李华,你打算利用假期出国旅游。请你就此给你的美国朋友Michael发一封电子邮件,谈谈你出国旅游的原因,并邀请Michael有时间来中国。
要点: 1. 出国旅游很有意义;
2. 开阔眼界,了解国外的风俗和历史;
3. 和来自不同文化背景的人交朋友,学外语;
4. 放松身心,欣赏美景。
注意:100词左右;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Michael,
How are you?
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Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Michael,
How are you?
These days, I am planning to travel abroad during the vacation. I think traveling abroad is very meaningful. First, traveling abroad can broaden my horizons. When I visit a foreign country, I can learn more about the customs and history of the country. At the same time, I can make lots of friends. Besides, communicating with the local people will give me the chance to learn a foreign language. The most important thing is that I can relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery.
Michael, please come to China when you are free. I do hope you can witness the great changes in China.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给要点 1. 出国旅游很有意义;2. 开阔眼界,了解国外的风俗和历史;3. 和来自不同文化背景的人交朋友,学外语;4. 放松身心,欣赏美景。,灵活运用英语知识,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子:travel abroad出国旅游,broaden my horizons拓宽视野,When I visit a foreign country是一句状语从句,The most important thing is that I can relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery是一句表语从句,I do hope you can witness the great changes in China是一句强调句,运用了First,At the same time,Besides等词是文章具有过渡性和条理性。