Question

17．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
The purpose of a high school graduation ceremony is to celebrate students who have successfully met the academic and extracurricular requirements for graduation．The ceremony provides a public chance in which graduating students receive their diplomas（文凭），marking their official graduation from high school．High school graduation ceremonies are typically held at the end of the academic year and are attended by teaching staff，graduates and their families and friends．
Though the event lasts only a few hours，a great ceremony is a memory that those who attend can treasure for years and years．Rather than marking the end of one stage in a student's life，graduation signifies the beginning of the next．
Along with the awarding of the diplomas，the commencement address（毕业演说） is an essential part of the ceremony．The address traditionally congratulates graduates on their achievements，encourages them on their endeavors and imparts wisdom for the future．
【写作内容】
假如你作为毕业生代表，要在高中毕业典礼进行演讲．请根据以下内容写一份演讲稿．
1．以约30个词概括这篇短文的主要内容；
2．然后以约120个词围绕高中生活和毕业的话题进行讲述，内容包括：
（1）高中毕业给你的感受；
（2）举一件难忘的高中经历说明你在高中三年学习生活的收获；
（3）在毕业之际，你想感激哪个人，简单说明理由．
【写作要求】
1）在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得  
   直接引用原文中的句子；
    2）作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．时态用一般现在时和一般过去时．人称用第一人称和第三人称．重要短语：a cherishing memory （一个珍贵的记忆），mark sth （标志着某事），symbolize sth （象征某事），be full of（充满，装满），be touched by（被…感动），together with （与…一起），achieve sth（获得某物），put on（上演），be embarrassed by（对…尴尬），cheered for（欢呼），gain sth（获得某物），be precious（宝贵的）．

【高分句型一】
1．The high school graduation ceremony is a cherishing memory，①because it ②not only marks the graduates'public graduation from the school，but also symbolizes the beginning of their future．
①此处连词"because"引导的原因状语从句，主句为"The high school graduation ceremony is a cherishing memory"．
②此处是由"not only…，but also…"连接两个并列的谓语动词"mark"和"symbolize"．
【高分句型二】
1．I am full of hope and expectation for the coming days，and also deeply touched by the past three years in this high school together with all the teachers and classmates．
此处是由"and"引导两个并列的动作，"am full of"和"touched by"．
【高分句型三】
3．I can't help recalling some good memories about my high school life．
此处是由固定结构"can't help doing sth"，意思为"忍不住，经不住做某事"．

解答 The high school graduation ceremony is a cherishing memory，because it not only marks the graduates'public graduation from the school，but also symbolizes the beginning of their future．【高分句型一】Besides，the graduates receive both congratulations and encouragement．（感受）
      In this unforgettable moment，as a student representa tive speaking here，I am full of hope and expectation for the coming days，and also deeply touched by the past three years in this high school together with all the teachers and classmates．【高分句型二】（收获）
       During the past senior school days，I have achieved a lot．I can't help recalling some good memories about my high school life．【高分句型三】Once I put on a dancing performance in the school Art Festival Show．Luckily，I missed a step and slipped．I was embarrassed but my classmates cheered for me．With their support，I continued with the rest of the dance perfectly．In the experi ence，I think the friendship and the encouragement I gained was the most precious．（感激之人及理由）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要．主题概括法 （段意合并法）．写作时应抓住主题句（关键句），一般为文章第一段和各段第一句，然后进行段意合并，再用1-2个漂亮的句式整理成文；分析原因时，注意分条称述，并使用恰当的衔接词，但要避免落入俗套；谈论启示时注意句式的变换使用，避免句式的单一．另外，要应尽可能多地使用一些高级词汇，为文章增色．