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9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线-划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分．
Some teenager have problems with their parents．They complain that their parents are looking too closely on everything about them．I full understand the discomfort what they feel，but there's no need to be too sad．Parents just want to make sure their kids are not getting into any trouble．They have probably heard some horrible stories，and don't want their kids to involved．Or perhaps they just want to know their kids better without realize that they feel offended．
My suggest is：Tell on your parents that you want to be trusted．If you don't think you can talk to them，writing them a letter and leave it around---they would find them．

分析 本文主要讲述一些青少年抱怨父母对自己盯得很紧．作者认为父母这样做是为了让自己的孩子不陷入麻烦之中．但建议青少年可以与父母交谈，也可给父母写信，告诉父母要相信自己．

解答 Some teenager have problems with their parents．They complain that their parents are looking too closely on everything about them．I full understand the discomfort what they feel，but there's no need to be too sad．Parents just want to make sure their kids are not getting into any trouble．They have probably heard some horrible stories，and don't want their kids to∧involved．Or perhaps they just want to know their kids better without realize that they feel offended．
My suggest is：Tell on your parents that you want to be trusted．If you don't think you can talk to them，writing them a letter and leave it around---they would find them．
详解：
1．teenager改为teenagers 考查名词复数．teenager是可数名词，其前有some修饰时用复数形式．
2．on改为at 考查词语用法．look on意为"在一旁观看，袖手旁观"，look at意为"看，注视（某人或某物）"，此处应是：看，注视（某人或某物）．
3．full改为fully 考查副词．understand是动词，要用副词修饰．
4．what改为that或去掉what 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词discomfort在从句中作feel的宾语，用关系代词that，也可省略．
5．加 be/get 考查动词不定式．kids与involve之间是动宾关系，用动词不定式被动式作宾语补足语．
6．realize改为realizing 考查动名词．without是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
7．suggest改为suggestion 考查名词．my是形容词性物主代词，后接名词．动词suggest的名词是suggestion．
8．去掉on 考查词语用法．tell是及物动词，后直接带宾语，不需要加介词．
9．writing改为write 考查句子结构．write与talk作并列谓语，都用动词原形．
10．them改为it 考查代词．it指代a letter．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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      11-year-old Penny always wears the dress with pictures of Barbies．These days，she wants a dress with pictures of robots Transformers（变形金刚）．Her mother Sara goes shopping in stores and also on the Internet，but she can't find this type of dresses．Penny refuses to wear anything but such a dress．
"I really wish the stores can sell such a dress which has a Transformer on it．If so，my daughter will wear that．And I think someone should do that．Why shouldn't I？"Then Sara learns to make a dress with a Transformer picture by herself．Penny really enjoys wearing it．Her classmates ask her where they can buy the same dress．Penny feels very proud，so does Eva who is good at doing business．Eva thinks Sara can do something more，and their business comes into being．They are friends，but it's the first time they have been partners．The women sell the first 70 dresses they make at a local market．The dresses sell out so fast that they can't make them fast enough．They decide to expand their business．
       They prepare to build a new factory and have more workers．Money is not the challenge for them．The organization Crowfunding agrees to lend them money．Eva and Sara meet their goal of $35，000 within days．"What we really need is to have more creative ideas and make the company develop rapidly，as people seem to want us to．"Sara says．
21．Why does Sara make a dress by herself for her daughter？D
A．Dresses are too expensive to buy．
B．She is interested in making clothes．
C．She wants to make mone y by making clothes．
D．No shop sells the kind of dress her daughter wants．
22．What can we learn from the text？C
A．Penny doesn't like girls'toys                 
B．Eva had worked with Sara before
C．Sara's products enjoyed a good market．
D．Penny's classmates think nothing of her new dress．
23．What's the biggest challenge for Eva and Sara？A
A．They are in need of new design ideas．
B．They have no experience of managing business．
C．They can't find skilled workers to make dresses．
D．They don't have enough money to build a factory．
20．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华．你的美国朋友Jim要来北京旅游，他写信寻求你对旅游地的建议，请你给他写封回信，内容包括：
1．景点名称；
2．参观内容；
3．推荐理由．
注意：1．词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
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4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear John，
Thank you very much for your invitations to dinner in your home tomorrow evening．It's been a long time since that we last met．Unfortunate，it is much to my regret that I cannot join you．I will be fully occupying in preparing for an importance lecture coming the day after tomorrow．I feel terribly sorry for missing chance for a get-together，and I hope that you'll have a good time with me．Maybe you and me can meet sometime next weekend．If so，please calling me when you get this letter．I think it was great to have a long chat with you．
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14．The voluntary organization aims to offer assistance to peoplein need（在困难中；在危急中）．
1．America's Best National Parks
Pacific：Yosemite National Park，Calif
Closest city：Oakland，Calif．（3.5-hour drive）
This Golden State treasure has dense forests and rock formations like the Half Dome-a naturalist's dream in winter，spring，summer or fall．"Anytime of year，it's such an important park，"says Patricia Schultz，author of 1000Places to See Before you Die．She recommends taking a tour with a naturalist guide to learn about the reintroduction of wolves into the park．
Pacific：Denali National Park，Alaska
Closest city：Fairbanks，Alaska （two-hour drive）
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West：Grand Teton National Park，Wyo．
Closest city：Jackson，Wyo．（45-minute drive）
Home to ski paradise Jackson Hole，the Grand Tetons offer a charming Wild West view in any season．Schultz especially likes the park for its cross-country skiing and wildlife sighting opportunities．
East：Acadia National Park，Maine
Closest city：Bangor，Maine （45-minute drive）
A former haunt（消磨时光的去处） of an older generation of America's wealthiest，this stretch of coastline once played host to Rockefellers，Astors and Vanderbilts．Easy hiking trails（小道） lead through forests dotted with small lakes．

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34．According to Schultz，the best thing to do in Denali National Park isA．
A．watching wild animals      
B．walking in the forests
C．climbing the mountains     
D．enjoying pristine scenery
35．What's special about Acadia National Park？D
A．It is very close to the city．
B．It has a wide variety of forests．
C．It is in the east of the U．S．
D．It attracted many famous rich people．
18．Without the friction （摩擦力）between feet and the ground，people would_____be able to walk．（　　）
A．in no timeB．by all meansC．in no wayD．on any account
4．Children with autism（孤独症） have difficulty with social skills and communication．They often behave in restricted and repetitive ways and have what seem like abnormally intense interests．
Autism is more common in boys than girls．What causes it is not clear．Scientists are studying genes and possible environmental influences．
Doctors usually cannot confirm a diagnosis（诊断） of autism until a child is about three years old．Rebecca Landa is a researcher at the Kennedy Krieger Institute and Johns Hopkins University School of Medicine in Maryland．Professor Landa wanted to find out what differences in development might be seen earlier．She led a new study that observed 235 babies between six and 36 months of age．
"At six months of age，the signs of some risk for developing communication and social delays，including autism，include motor delays．Like when you lay your baby on their back and you pull them by the arms gently into a seated position，the baby's head may nod back behind the shoulders，like poor head control．So that does not mean that the baby is going to have autism，but it does mean the baby needs to have some exercises to strengthen their body．And when they strengthen their body，they are better able to play with toys and engage with people，which then goes on to help them have better outcomes．"
By the time a baby is one year old，signs of possible autism include difficulty in using words and not looking eye-to-eye or reaching out to other people．By 14 months，the baby might smile less and use language less．However，Professor Landa says these signs can be so small that they might be missed during a short health exam．
"It's important for parents to stay tuned into their children's development，and if a parent is concerned about a child's development，for professionals to listen to them．"
The earlier parents notice delays，she says，the sooner they can begin doing s imple things that may help improve their child's development．For example：talking to the child about what they are doing，commenting when the child shows them something，and playing simple games that keep the child's attention．
36．What is the best title of the passage？A
A．Watching for Early Signs of Autism in Babies
B．How to Confirm a Diagnosis of Autism
C．Children with Autism Have Difficulty in Communication
D．Ways to Help Children with Autism to Recover
37．What can we learn form the third paragraph？B
A．Landa has found ways to confirm a diagnosis of autism when a baby is about six months．
B．Landa tried to find autism earlier by comparing the differences as the baby grows up．
C．Now doctors can confirm a diagnosis of autism before a child is three years old．
D．Doctors observed 235 babies either 6 or 36 months of age under the guide of Landa．
38．When a baby with signs of possible autism is a year and two months，he mayD．
A．avoid eye contact              
B．have difficulty in raising his head
C．develop bad manners            
D．hate to communicate with others
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A．Education                  
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