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4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear John，
Thank you very much for your invitations to dinner in your home tomorrow evening．It's been a long time since that we last met．Unfortunate，it is much to my regret that I cannot join you．I will be fully occupying in preparing for an importance lecture coming the day after tomorrow．I feel terribly sorry for missing chance for a get-together，and I hope that you'll have a good time with me．Maybe you and me can meet sometime next weekend．If so，please calling me when you get this letter．I think it was great to have a long chat with you．
Sorry again．
Yours，
Jerry

分析 本文主要讲述作者因要准备一个重要的演讲而不能参加John的宴会邀请．希望John没有作者会玩得高兴，可能只有下个周末的某个时候再见面了．

解答 Dear John，
Thank you very much for your invitations to dinner in your home tomorrow evening．It's been a long time since that we last met．Unfortunate，it is much to my regret that I cannot join you．I will be fully occupying in preparing for an importance lecture coming the day after tomorrow．I feel terribly sorry for missing∧chance for a get-together，and I hope that you'll have a good time with me．Maybe you and me can meet sometime next weekend．If so，please calling me when you get this letter．I think it was great to have a long chat with you．
Sorry again．
详解：
1．invitatoions改为invitation 考查名词．此处"邀请"只有一份，应用单数形式．
2．去掉that 考查连词．在英语中，两个单句只要一个连词，已有连词since，that是多余的，要去掉．
3．Unfortunate改为Unfortunately 考查副词．修饰句子要用副词．
4．occupying改为occupied 考查固定搭配．be occupied in意为"使忙碌于，使从事于"，是固定搭配．
5．importance改为important 考查形容词．lecture是名词，其前用形容词修饰作定语．
6．加the 考查冠词．chance后有介词短语for a get-together作后置定语，加the表示特指．
7．with改为without 考查介词．根据句意：我希望你没有我会玩得高兴．用介词without．
8．me改为I 考查代词．and是并列连词，它前后连接两个相同的语法成分，you和I是并列主语，都用主格代词．
9．calling改为call 考查句子结构．祈使句中要用动词原形．
10．was改为is 考查动词时态．此处讲述的是一般事实，用一般现在时态．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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