题目内容
【题目】假如你是某校学生会主席李华,准备在高一年级学生中举办一次“英文海报设计比赛”活动。请根据下面的提示,写一则英语书面通知。
1.活动目的:丰富校园生活,提高创新意识和英语水平。
2.展出地点: 教学楼三楼报告厅。
3.展评时间:5月16日—20日。
注意: 1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Notice
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The Student Union
April 27, 2017
【答案】A Notice
To enrich our campus life , improve our English and promote our creative thinking , the Student Union has decided to hold a competition of creative design of posters in English. All the students in Senior I are expected to take an active part in the activity and submit your designs, which should be related to our school life.
After your posters are collected, an exhibition will be held in the Lecture Hall of the teaching building from May 16th to 20th, and then the best prized will be presented to the best designers.
It is hoped that each of you can get involved!
The Student Union
April 27, 2017
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时,要注意以下几点:1. 通篇以一般现在时态为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词,使上下文行文流畅,衔接自然流程。3.
注意语气。该文是“英文海报设计比赛”活动的书面通知,除了条理清晰,叙述简单明了的要求以外,要具有号召力,达到吸引大家参加活动的目的。
【范文亮点】
1. 范文开头使用了三个并列(To enrich our campus life , improve our English and promote our creative thinking);使用非限定性定语从句(All the students in Senior I are expected to take an active part in the activity and submit your designs, which should be related to our school life.)。
2. 文章大量使用被动语态,使得文章句式不单调乏味;文章行文流畅,连接自然,主题突出。