题目内容
【题目】书面表达
现在很多青少年发现很难与父母相处,为此某英文报社发起了一项主题为“父母与孩子的关系”的征文活动。假如你是李华,请你根据下面提示写一篇100词左右的信,阐述你对此事的认识。
提示:
(1) 父母对孩子生活过于关心,对孩子的学习施加压力过大;
(2) 孩子与父母缺乏交流,难以相互理解;
(3) 你的建议。
(4) 信的开头和结尾已给。
Dear Sir/Madam
As we all know, many teenagers nowadays find it hard to get on well with their parents.
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【答案】
As we all know, many teenagers nowadays find it hard to As we all know their parents. There exist many reasons for this phenomenon. On the one hand, parents care too much about their children in their daily life and put too much pressure on their study, which makes their children stressed. On the other hand, lacking communication, teenagers and their parents can’t understand each other well.
In my opinion, parents should give their children more freedom so as to allow them to develop their own interests. Besides, we teenagers should understand our parents’ feelings and try hard to live up to their expectations. Most importantly, we should often communicate with our parents if possible. Only in this way can we build up mutual trust and improve the relationships with our parents.
Looking forward to hearing from you and sharing your opinion!
Sincerely Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语As we all know正如我们所知;As we all know与某人相处的好;On the one hand,On the other hand,一方面,另一方面;In my opinion在我看来;so as to比如;Only in this way can we build up mutual trust and improve the relationships with our parents中only放在句首要倒装等。