Question

5．请根据下面提示，写一篇短文．词数不少于50．
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim．Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so．

Answer 1

分析 本文是图画类作文，要求根据图片内容和提示用英语写一篇短文．这既是情景作文又是一种开放性作文．
重点词汇：try to do（尽力去做某事）；  extremely（非常，极其）； come to nothing（失败，毫无结果）；
convey（传达，表达）；fulfill one's goals （实现某人的目标）；definitely（清楚地，当然）；take  for
granted（把…视为理所当然）
高分句型：1．In my opinion，①what that the picture conveys is ②that we should find a proper way to fulfill our goals no matter what we do．
                 ①what that the picture conveys 是一个主语从句，疑问代词what捉动词convey的宾语；②that引导一个表语从句，作系动词is的表语．
                 2．The little boy curiously tries on the larger shoes，hoping to walk fast just like adults．
                  hoping to walk fast just like adults在句中是现在分词短语作伴随状语．
                 3．①To avoid such problems，all we need to do is to adopt a proper and reasonable way，②which will absolutely benefit us．
                  ①To avoid such problems是不定式短语作目的状语；②which引导一个非限制性定语从句．

解答 Jim，as you can see in the picture，a little boy is trying to walk in a pair of shoes which is extremely larger than the size of his feet．The sweet smiling on his face shows his excitement about getting his wish--trying big shoes to go faster．Obviously，his wish will come to nothing．
In my opinion，what that the picture conveys is that we should find a proper way to fulfill our goals no matter what we do．（高分句型一）The little boy curiously tries on the larger shoes，hoping to walk fast just like adults（高分句型二）．But I don't think it's an easy job．Some people in our life do exactly the same as the boy．It's definitely good to keep an open mind and have courage to try something new．However，we'd better seek more suitable ways instead of taking it for granted．Otherwise，we will get into troubles．To avoid such problems，all we need to do is to adopt a proper and reasonable way，which will absolutely benefit us（高分句型三）．
And how do you think about that，Jim？

点评 看图作文要求将画面所包含的有效信息用文字表达出来，并适当发挥想象．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．