Question

【题目】作为中学生，我们应该如何理解父母对我们的严格要求和爱护呢？下面是三名高中生想对父母说的话，请你就此谈谈自己的看法。

想对父母说……

我需要放松， 希望有时候能看看电视，上上网。 我需要朋友，希望能和朋友们一起说笑、玩闹。 我希望得到父母的信任，他们能像朋友一样待我。

注意：1. 词数120词左右； 2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯；

3. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

In China, children are the center of each family, ___________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

In China, children are the centre of each family. All parents wish their children, especially senior high students, could go to top universities and have a bright future. So all the children are always expected to make full use of their time to study. They are not allowed to watch TV, play the computer games or go out to play with their friends .

Some students just complain that their parents are only concerned about their grades and not their other needs. They wish to have their own time to watch TV or surf the Internet. They also hope to chat or play with their friends.

In my opinion, our parents are responsible for us. Perhaps out of nothing but love, they are sometimes too strict with us. But I think we should learn to communicate with them, telling them that we’ll work harder and will never let them down. Only by doing this will we earn trust and respect from them

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语be expected to do 期望做某事；be concerned about关心；in one’s opinion 在某人看来；be responsible for 对……负责；make full use of充分利用；But I think we should learn to communicate with them, telling them that we’ll work harder and will never let them down.这个句子telling做伴随状语；Only by doing this will we earn trust and respect from them这个句子运用到only +状语+部分倒装 ；