Question

11．假如你的网友John即将外出旅行，请你根据以下提示，用英语给他写封电子邮件，向他介绍你对旅游的看法并提醒他旅行注意事项．
1．旅游是一种非常好的活动．当你累了或有空的时候，到外地走走．欣赏美景，呼吸新鲜空气，交朋友，放松身心，忘记疲劳，有益健康．
2．旅行前的准备．了解天气，带好衣服、相机、常用药品等．
3．旅行时注意饮食卫生和安全，防止小偷．
要求：1、行文连贯，不得逐句翻译；
2、词数：100词左右
Dear John，
I am glad to hear that you are going to travel．Now I'd like to share my view on traveling with you．
                                                         
Yours．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于旅游话题的电子邮件．光棍节题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明写信目的；二旅游活动的好处；三旅行前的准备以及旅行时应该注意的问题；四表达祝愿．
高分句型：
1．Only by relaxing yourself will you forget your tiredness and build your health．句子里Only 引导状语by relaxing yourself 位于句首，主句用倒装will you forget．
只有放松身心，你才能忘记疲劳，恢复健康．
2．On your journey，you must pay attention to what you eat．句子里what you eat是宾语从句，表示"你吃的东西"．
在你的旅途中，要注意饮食卫生．

解答 Dear John，
    I am glad to hear that you are going to travel．Now I'd like to share my view on traveling with you．（点明写信目的）
   In my opinion，traveling is a very good activity．When you get tired with your work or study and when you have free time，you can go out to enjoy the beauty of nature．You can breathe the fresh air，meet different people and make friends with them．Only by relaxing yourself will you forget your tiredness and build your health．【高分句型一】（旅游活动的好处）
   In order to have a pleasant journey，you need to make full preparations ahead of time．You'd better have clear information about the weather，and bring proper clothes，a camera，some medicine for common injuries or diseases and so on．On your journey，you must pay attention to what you eat．【高分句型二】Be careful with everything everywhere in case your money gets stolen．（旅行前的准备以及旅行时应该注意的问题）
    Do you agree with me？Wish you a good journey．（表达祝愿）
                                                      Yours，
 Linda

点评 考查提纲类作文．
提纲类作文一般给的要点比较多，这就要求在写作时不能有遗漏，无论是汉语要点还是英语要点都要在作文中体现出来，这些提示也是阅卷时的要点．如果题目要求有自我发挥的内容，也要写出来．