题目内容
8.假设你是李津.你校英语校刊正在举办"E-books or Paper Books"的征文,请你用英语谈一下你对此的看法.短文应包含以下要点:1)电子书的优势(如便宜,容易携带,节省空间等);
2)纸质书的优势(如对眼睛伤害较少);
3)谈谈你的看法.
注意:
1)词数:不少于100;
2)可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯;
3)文章开头已为你写好,不计入词数.
There is a heated discussion among my fellow students over the choice between e-books or paper book.
Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books,one of which is its cheapness.Most e-books are much cheaper compared with paper books.Besides,they take up little space compared with paper books.
Others don't agree with them.They argue that reading from screens for a long time does too much harm to eyes,while comfortableness that paper books bring to readers always matters most to them.
However,as a student without too much pocket money,I prefer to read e-books.What's more,my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time.Therefore I would rather choose e-books at the cost of reading comfortableness..
分析 这是一篇提纲类作文,你校英语校刊正在举办"E-books or Paper Books"的征文,请你用英语谈一下你对此的看法本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,注意要适当拓展,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.
(高分句型一) Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books,one of which is its cheapness.
该句使用that引导同位语从句,作为view的内容;which引导非限制性定语从句.
高分句型二)What's more,my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time.
so…that…如此以至于,句意为我的日程安排如此紧张以至于选择电子书节省很多时间.
高级词汇:advantage优点;compared with与…相比;take up占据;would rather宁愿.
解答 There is a heated discussion among my fellow students over the choice between e-books or paper books.
(高分句型一) Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books,one of which is its cheapness.Most e-books are much cheaper compared with paper books.Besides,they take up little space compared with paper books.(电子书的优点)
Others don't agree with them.They argue that reading from screens for a long time does too much harm to eyes,while comfortableness that paper books bring to readers always matters most to them.(电子书的缺点)
However,as a student without too much pocket money,I prefer to read e-books.(高分句型二)What's more,my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time.Therefore I would rather choose e-books at the cost of reading comfortableness.(我的看法)
点评 这类文章书写时,需要做到脉络清晰,并且观点明确,理由得当.首先审题,明白文章的话题主要是什么,也就是整篇文章的中心,其次就是要抓住题目给出的主要内容,这也就是给文章的主要脉络进行了定格,所以这类文章在书写时,对于预言逻辑能力的运用能力,词汇和句型的使用能力,文章连接的高要求较高,同时学生在书写时,对于字数也要进行适当的控制.