题目内容
20.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,五一前夕学校组织"我爱我家"的实践周活动.请你根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,给学校英语报投稿,叙述你们班在"我爱我家"活动中,对共享单车使用情况进行调查和制作倡议书进行宣传的全过程.注意:词数不少于60.
提示词:共享单车shared bikes
微信朋友圈WeChat Moments
倡议书initiative?
Various activities were organized in our school during the Social Practice Week themed"Love Our Community"before May Day Holiday.
As the school appealed for our community spirit,we immediately moved into action,discussing what we could do for our community.Ideas like garbage classification,smog control all flashed through our minds.However,we finally decided to investigate the problem with the.
分析 本篇书面表达属于图画类作文,根据提示信息针对五一前夕学校组织"我爱我家"的实践周活动这一话题开展讨论,大家发表了不同的看法,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点,分别从不同观点和理由两个方面来讨论该话题.2、要根据图画进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态,就本文而言应该用一般过去时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:
(高分句型一) As the school appealed for our community spirit,we immediately moved into action,discussing what we could do for our community.
该句使用了as引导时间状语从句,当…时候;discussing是现在分词做状语表示伴随;
(高分句型二)With our investigation going deeper,more and more problems were revealed.
该句使用了被动句型,即be revealed;
(高分句型三)What irritated us most was that some bikes were even deliberately damaged.
What irritated us most 是主语从句,意思是最使我们生气的是;that some bikes…引导表语从句;
高级词汇:currently目前地;put our idea into action付诸实施;to our excitement让我们兴奋地是;
解答 Various activities were organized in our school during the Social Practice Week themed"Love Our Community"before May Day Holiday.
(高分句型一) As the school appealed for our community spirit,we immediately moved into action,discussing what we could do for our community.Ideas like garbage classification,smog control all flashed through our minds.However,we finally decided to investigate the problem with the use of the currently popular shared bikes like Mobike and Ofo.(引出写作话题)
Wasting no time,we immediately put our idea into action.(高分句型二)With our investigation going deeper,more and more problems were revealed.Some bikes were parked disorderly.Some were locked with personal locks.(高分句型三)What irritated us most was that some bikes were even deliberately damaged.We felt urgent action was needed to solve these problems.As a result,we posted the pictures we took on WeChat Moments,starting an initiative for the proper use of the shared bikes.Much to our excitement,people responded positively.Our post was read about 20,000 times,got 10,000 likes and received many encouraging comments.(分析共享单车现状)
We felt a great sense of achievement,but we also know that the bike-sharing program will not work well until each and every member of our society watches their behavior and acts properly.
点评 本文是图画类写作,考生在写作前应仔细观察所给图画,再运用准确的、合适的语言结合实际将图片内容描述清楚.写作过程中切忌偏离主题,尽量做到图文搭配.