Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Bob,

I am very exciting to receive an e-mail from you and I am glad to know you have a wonderful time during the past summer holiday. I took a trip to the countryside with some of my friend in last summer. Country life, in your opinion, gave me relaxation, which I can’t enjoy in big cities. There was river nearby, in that we went swimming every now and then. You can never imagine how fun it was to swim together with friends in the cool, clean river in so hot days. In fact, I had never had a better holiday before and I took plenty of photos there. I keep the photos where I can see them every day, as they are worth keep forever.

Yours,

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】 exiting---exited

【2】have---had

【3】friend---friends

【4】your---my

【5】was后加a

【6】that---which

【7】 how---what

【8】so---such

【9】keep---keeping

【解析】

【1】 exiting---exited 考查词性。exiting表示令人兴奋的，修饰物；exited表示兴奋地，激动地，修饰人。故exiting---exited。

【2】have---had 考查时态。根据后文 the past summer holiday上一个暑假，可知是过去时。故have---had。

【3】friend---friends 考查名词的单复数。根据前文中的some可知，此处应该用复数形式。故friend---friends。

【4】your---my 考查固定用法。 in my opinion在我看来，故your---my。

【5】was后加a 考查冠词。后文的 river为可数名词，且此处为单数。故was后加a。

【6】that---which 考查定语从句。因为前文中有in，不能用that，只能用which。故that---which 。

【7】how---what 考查连词。句意：你无法想象，在这么热的日子里，和朋友们一起在清凉的河水里游泳是多么有趣。故how---what 。

【8】so---such 考查固定用法。hot days为名词词组，应该用such修饰，so后面加形容词。故so---such。

【9】keep---keeping 考查固定用法。be worth doing 主动表被动,“值得做……”。此处表示他们值得被永远保存。故keep---keeping。