题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Frank将到你所在的省会城市进行为期一周的“探索中国文化”之旅。Frank来信询问你相关信息,请你给他回信,要点如下:
1.推荐食宿地点;
2.推荐旅游景点;
3.其他注意事项。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Frank,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Frank,
It's really exciting to know that you'll visit Kunming to explore Chinese culture. I'm writing to provide you with some relevant information you asked for in your letter.
Located in the center of the city, the Green Lake Hotel is a wonderful choice for your accommodation. As the name suggests, it's within easy reach of the Green Lake Park, a popular place for natives. You can taste various delicious traditional snacks in and around the park. After that, Yunnan University, which is just opposite the park, can be your next destination. Wandering around the quiet campus with old buildings offers you an opportunity to refresh yourself. In addition, Yunnan Nationalities Village and West Mountain are equally worth a visit.
Remember to take your camera to take pictures and sun cream to protect yourself from the sunrays. Looking forward to meeting you in Kunming!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文是一篇半开放性作文,要求考生把自己当成李华,你的英国朋友Frank将到你所在的省会城市进行为期一周的“探索中国文化”之旅。Frank来信询问你相关信息,请你给他回信。全文以一般现在时为主,使用第三人称。
第1步:审题。根据提示可知本文是一封求职信,给广告公司写信介绍个人情况。全文以一般现在时为主,使用第一人称。
第2步:组织要点。推荐食宿地点;推荐旅游景点;其他注意事项。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
本篇范文结构完美,条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确,涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点,且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构,整篇文章富有变化,并不死板。尽量运用了高级的词汇,如:relevant information,be located in,accommodation;还使用了一些高级句型,如定语从句As the name suggests, it's within easy reach of the Green Lake Park, a popular place for natives.同时还合理使用了一些串联语,如in addition等,这些写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次,显示了很强的驾驭语言的能力。