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11.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
Last Sunday morning,when I was having a walk in the park near my home,I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.I didn't have my camera with me at that time,but I rushed back home to get.Unfortunately,by the time I got back,they have finished the scene and the actor couldn't be seen everywhere.I was really disappointing and about to leave while he walked out of a building.He was right there in the front of me!I couldn't believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken with him,but he signed his name on my shirt!

分析 本文写的是作者在上周六早晨在公园里散步时的好运:遇到了自己最喜欢的演员,不仅拍了照还签了名.

解答 Last Sunday morning,when I was having a walk in the park near my home,I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.I didn't have my camera with me at that time,but I rushed back home to get∧.Unfortunately,by the time I got back,they have finished the scene and the actor couldn't be seen everywhere.I was really disappointing and about to leave while he walked out of a building.He was right there in the front of me!I couldn't believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken with him,but he signed his name on my shirt!
详解:
1.make改为making;考查分词作定语,作者遇到了一群人在拍电影,此处拍电影应该是crew的定语,是主动关系所以改成making.
2.actor改为actors;考查名词,固定短语one of+复数名词,…中的一个,故用actors.
3.but改为so;考查连词,根据前后句义:我没带相机,匆忙的回去去取,应当是因果关系,故用so.
4.get 后加it;考查代词,分析句意为"匆忙回家去取相机",get缺少宾语,所以加上it,指代前面的camera作宾语.
5.have改为had;考查动词的时态,by the time+过去的时间状语,应该用过去完成时:had done,所以改成had.
6.everywhere改为anywhere;考查句意,分析句意为"是在任何地方都看不到那个演员",故用anywhere.
7.disappointing改为disappointed;考查分词作形容词,现在分词做形容词修饰物,过去分词做形容词修饰人,此处主语为I,故用过去分词形式disappointed.
8.while改为when;考查时间状语从句,若主、从句表示的是两个同时(或几乎同时)发生的短暂性动作,一般要用 when.
9.去掉the;考查固定短语,in front of 在…前面(范围之外),in the front of 在…前面(范围之内),结合语境此处要去掉the.
10.had改为have;考查动词,本句是一个倒装句,把did提前构成倒装,也显示了时态是过去时,所以谓语动词要改成原形,所以改成have.

点评 短文改错时首先要通读全文,了解短文基本大意,再结合上下文语境分析句子之间的关系,运用所掌握的基础语言知识找出文中的错误所在.

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