题目内容
Forming good study habits is a great start on a path to success. Even small changes can make a big difference and, over time, will change not only your approach to studying and organizing but your overall outlook on school and work.
Having effective (有效的) study habits creates a more efficient academic environment. Planning your study schedule in advance and faithfully sticking to it saves time. Even giving consideration to small details makes a difference. Developing an efficient study plan can make your academic life go much more smoothly.
When you have good study habits, you tend to be less stressed. Students who are anxious on exam days are typically those who came unprepared. Students who organize their lives and stick to their study schedules are confident and relaxed at test-taking time.
Regardless of whether you are setting a good example for classmates or for friends, showing good study habits can have a positive effect on those around you. Your friends and classmates may turn to their own studies as your study. Your roommates may be inspired to organize their own rooms and study plans.
【写作内容】
1. 以约30词概括短文的内容要点;
2. 以约120词就“养成良好学习习惯”进行讨论,内容包括:
(1)你有哪些好的学习习惯;
(2)好的学习习惯帮助你成功的经历;
(3)如何才能养成良好的学习习惯。
【写作要求】
1. 你可以使用实例或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名。
【评分标准】 概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯。
By developing good study habits, you will work more efficiently and experience less stress in the learning process. Having good habits and skills can also influence those around you.
As for me, I benefit a lot from my good habits like getting up early to read English aloud, going over what I have learned before going to bed, and listening to some English programs every day.
In the past, I dared not speak English because I was poor in pronunciation. Thanks to my good habits, however, I have been making progress in my English speaking. Now I’m actively taking part in the discussion in English classes, and also, I am doing much better in English exams.
Therefore, I think it is of great significance to cultivate good study habits. when you have made a plan, stick to it for at least one week, no matter how hard it is. Then you may find it is not as difficult as it appeared. Besides, finding a partner to study together with is also a good way to keep you motivated.
【解析】写作共分为两部分,要区分两部分不同的内容和词数要求。概括部分要精练,第二部分要注意内容全面,行文连贯。第一部分,概括题文,by doing sth.和having good中使用介词及动名词作为句首,极大的节约了单词的个数,同时在表达文意上也显得简练。第二部分as for me直接引出个人经验,使用like doing sth.习惯做某事,连续接了三个短句getting up…going over…listening to…将个人习惯流畅地介绍完毕;使用词组搭配benefit a lot受益颇多和用what引导宾语从句,使得句子富有变化;in the past讲述过去dared not speak English不敢说英语的原因是 poor in pronunciation发音差,与养成习惯后actively taking part in the discussion积极参与讨论, doing much better in English exams考试成绩提升形成对比,养成好习惯所带来的收益明显,比较有说服力。poor in在……贫乏 ,taking part in参加 使用简洁得当;therefore开始总结,点出好习惯的重要性,I think it is of great significance to cultivate good study habits 中 of great significance重要意义 比单词important使句子润色更多,significance此类相对高级的词汇会使文章不易浅显乏味,也能更好的表达观点。 Then, Besides的使用划分了层次,使得总结段文章思路清晰。总结:概括文题需简洁,一定不能超过题设字数。讲述个人经历并结论时不能过于牵强,总结全文时不要重复写过的句子。
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