Question

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[写作内容]
1．用约30个单词概述上述图表内容；
2．用约120词发表你的观点，内容包括：
（1）举例分析目前高中生睡眠缺失的原因．
（2）就如何保证充足睡眠提出具体建议．
[写作要求]
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题．
Various factors to blame，people of different occupations in contemporary society are more or less suffering sleep disorders，as a consequence of which their average work-day sleeping hours get shortened．（高分句型一）（30 words）
Shockingly，due to constant stress and tremendous amounts of homework，high school kids are among the sufferers．Take me as an example：Not only do I have to rise early，but I also need to face frequent tests and exercises once out of bed．（高分句型二）Therefore，burning midnight oil can never be too common for me．How can I ensure myself enough sleep？
To solve the problem，effective measures are to be worked out．Personally，having a better management of time is far more necessary．Make first things always first．That way，your work and play can be well balanced．Furthermore，a proper diet will surely count．Only with high efficiency and right food can you guarantee a satisfactory daily sleep．（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Shockingly令人震惊的是；due to由于；Not only，but  also不仅，而且；Therefore因此；Personally就个人而言；Furthermore而且；
Various factors to blame，people of different occupations in contemporary society are more or less suffering sleep disorders，as a consequence of which their average work-day sleeping hours get shortened．（高分句型一）
Take me as an example：Not only do I have to rise early，but I also need to face frequent tests and exercises once out of bed．（高分句型二）
Only with high efficiency and right food can you guarantee a satisfactory daily sleep．（高分句型三）

解答 Various factors to blame，people of different occupations in contemporary society are more or less suffering sleep disorders，as a consequence of which their average work-day sleeping hours get shortened．（高分句型一）（30 words）
      Shockingly，due to constant stress and tremendous amounts of homework，high school kids are among the sufferers．Take me as an example：Not only do I have to rise early，but I also need to face frequent tests and exercises once out of bed．（高分句型二）Therefore，burning midnight oil can never be too common for me．How can I ensure myself enough sleep？
      To solve the problem，effective measures are to be worked out．Personally，having a better management of time is far more necessary．Make first things always first．That way，your work and play can be well balanced．Furthermore，a proper diet will surely count．Only with high efficiency and right food can you guarantee a satisfactory daily sleep．（高分句型三）（120 words）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．