Question

5．假定你是李津，暑假你参加了英国游学活动，住在Mary家中，回国后给Mary写一封信表示感谢，要点如下：
1．安全抵家：
2．回顾英国游学体会：
3．感谢房东的帮助：
4．附寄两张合影；
5．表达愿望．
注意：1．词数不少于100词．
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．结束语己为你写好．
Dear Mary，
I've come back home safely．Looking back to my stay in Britain，I felt so happy and satisfied．The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot．I also benefited a lot from learning together with local students．More importantly，your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culture and adapt to the life there．So I'm so grateful to you．
By the way，attached to the letter are two photos taken with you，which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together．
You are expected to come to China soon．
     Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Jin

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Looking back to my stay in Britain，I felt so happy and satisfied．
该句型使用looking现在分词做状语，回顾我在英国的日子．
（高分句型二） attached to the letter are two photos taken with you，which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together．
该句型使用attached to倒装句；which引导一个非限制性定语从句；
高级词汇：look back on回顾；impress给人印象；adapt to 适应；
 More importantly更重要的是；By the way顺便说；

解答 Dear Mary，
   I've come back home safely．（高分句型一）Looking back to my stay in Britain，I felt so happy and satisfied．（回顾英语生活）The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot．I also benefited a lot from learning together with local students．More importantly，（感谢房东帮助）your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culture and adapt to the life there．So I'm so grateful to you．
   By the way，（高分句型二） attached to the letter are two photos taken with you，which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together．
   You are expected to come to China soon．（表达愿望）
   Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 这类文章书写时，需要做到脉络清晰，并且观点明确，理由得当．首先审题，明白文章的话题主要是什么，也就是整篇文章的中心，如本文的主要话题就是"倡导做一位文明的中国司机"，其次就是要抓住题目给出的主要内容，这也就是给文章的主要脉络进行了定格，所以这类文章在书写时，对于预言逻辑能力的运用能力，词汇和句型的使用能力，文章连接的高要求较高，同时学生在书写时，对于字数也要进行适当的控制．