Question

10．假定你是李华，一位热衷中国文化的美国朋友James来信想了解你最近参加的一次校园"诗词大会"（PoetryConference）活动．请用英文给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1．活动目的（走进中国诗词，感受传统文化…）
2．活动内容（诗歌诵读、古诗词欣赏…）
3．活动体验（…）注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear James，
Glad to share with you my latest participation in School Poetry Conference．（点明书信主题）Basically，the activity aims to offer us a further approach into Chinese poetry and help us form a better understanding of the traditional Chinese culture．【高分句型一】（活动目的）During the activity，we chanted and appreciated the charming Chinese poems in various ways．Meanwhile，we enjoyed the great fun from our close interaction．（活动内容）For me，it was a meaningful experience，which turned out to be a fantastic journey into the world of Chinese culture as well as the inner world of ourselves．【高分句型二】（自己的活动体验）
Do you havesome similar activities？Please introduce one to me next time．（想要了解对方这一方面的活动）
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇介绍校园"诗词大会"活动的作文．根据题目要求可知用一般过去时态和第一人称．内容包括：一点明书信主题；二活动目的；三活动内容；四自己的活动体验；五想要了解对方这一方面的活动．
高分句型：
1．Basically，the activity aims to offer us a further approach into Chinese poetry and help us form a better understanding of the traditional Chinese culture．句子里谓语动词aims to 表示"目的在于"； approach into表示"接近"；form a better understanding of表示"对于某事形成更好的理解"．
基本上来说，这个活动的目的在于提供给我们更接近中国诗词的机会，并且有助于我们对于中国传统文化形成更好的理解．
2．For me，it was a meaningful experience，which turned out to be a fantastic journey into the world of Chinese culture as well as the inner world of ourselves．句子里which引导非限制性定语从句，代指a meaningful experience；as well as 表示"也包括"．
对我来说，这是一次有意义的经历，这次经历结果是一次进入中国文化和我们内心世界的奇妙之旅．

解答 Dear James，
    Glad to share with you my latest participation in School Poetry Conference．（点明书信主题）Basically，the activity aims to offer us a further approach into Chinese poetry and help us form a better understanding of the traditional Chinese culture．【高分句型一】（活动目的）During the activity，we chanted and appreciated the charming Chinese poems in various ways．Meanwhile，we enjoyed the great fun from our close interaction．（活动内容）For me，it was a meaningful experience，which turned out to be a fantastic journey into the world of Chinese culture as well as the inner world of ourselves．【高分句型二】（自己的活动体验）
     Do you have some similar activities？Please introduce one to me next time．（想要了解对方这一方面的活动）
                                                                        Yours，
                                                                   Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作时，考生不能遗漏要点要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数．考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作练习以外，还可以适当背诵一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．