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【题目】假如你是高三一班李华,看到了学校学生会近期要举办成人礼仪式(Adult Ceremony)的一则招募志愿者启事,你非常感兴趣,请根据要点给学生会李老师写一封应征邮件。要点包括:

1. 你的相关特长(组织能力,创造力等)

2. 你对成人礼仪式的认识。

注意: 1. 词数100左右。2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Li,

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Yours,

Li Hua

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One Possible Version

Dear Mr. Li,

Im Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 3. Im writing to apply to be a volunteer in the coming Adult Ceremony.

First of all, I am convinced that I am well qualified for the job. I am skilled at organizing activities as well as communicating with others and I have the ability to deal with emergencies. Besides, I am highly creative, which is of vital importance to this activity. As far as I am concerned, Adult Ceremony is of great significance to all of the students. Not only can it raise students sense of responsibility, but also it can make it possible for us to be partially independent of our parents. Whats more, students can learn to express their gratitude to their teachers as well as their parents.

In conclusion, I would appreciate it if I am admitted as a volunteer in the Adult Ceremony. Thank you for considering my application.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析:本文要求一封应征邮件应征成人礼仪式的志愿者写作时注意以下几点:1.涵盖所有内容。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时,以第称为主。3、注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色,如宾语从句I am convinced that I am well qualified for the job.;非限制性定语从句I am highly creative, which is of vital importance to this activity.部分倒装Not only can it raise students’ sense of responsibility;deal with处理,解决;As far as I am concerned就我而言;as well as以及,和;In conclusion总的来说;还有First of allBesidesWhats more等有效地使语句间连接紧凑。

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【题目】假如你是李华,是红星外国语学校的学生会主席,根据双方约定,你们打算今年夏天去英国Studio School进行四个星期的学习和旅游。请你写信给Studio School,就下面事宜进行通告:

1. 你们一行有30,其中2位教师,18个男生,10位女生,希望他们安排home-stay家庭;

2. 你们计划上午上课,下午到图书馆学习,晚上自由活动,周末安排旅游。

3. 盼望对方尽早发出正式邀请,以便办理正式手续。

注意:

1. 可以适当增减细节,使其连贯完整;

2. 字数在100左右,信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇: 办理手续 go through all the procedures 正式邀请函 formal invitation

Dear Sir,

I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union of Hongxing Foreign language School.

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【题目】假如你是李华,即将参加高考,结束自己的高中生活。你想写一封电子邮件给一位你高中时期最尊敬的老师,对他或者她这几年来的关心和帮助表示感谢。

内容要求:

1. 他或者她最让你感动的一件事情

2. 你的感想

3. 对老师表示祝福

注意:

1. 不少于120词

2. 不得透露与考生相关的姓名、学校名称以及地区名称等

3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,表达顺畅

Dear Mr./Ms. Wang,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

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