Question

13．临近学期期末，学校生活对于你的印象是什么？同学作为你学生生活的陪伴伙伴一定给你带来了很多快乐．以My classmate为题，写一篇描述你身边的同学的文章．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）One day on his way to school，he saw a little girl crossing the road．
句子里使用了see sb doing，意思是看到某人正在做某事．
（高分句型二）She told him where she lived，and he took her home．When LiuKai hurried into the classroom，the teacher had already begun his lesson．
在这句里，where she lived是一个宾语从句，放在tell后面；另外，使用了when引导的时间状语从句，注意句子的时态使用，在主句中使用了had begun的过去完成时．
重点短语和句型：be ready to do准备做某事；on his way to 在去某个地方的路上；too frightened to move太而不能；caught her by the arm抓住它的胳膊；was praised for 为…而受到表扬．

解答 My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate．He is a good student and always ready to help others．
（高分句型一）One day on his way to school，he saw a little girl crossing the road．A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move．The car nearly hit her．Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm．The little girl was saved．（高分句型二）She told him where she lived，and he took her home．When LiuKai hurried into the classroom，the teacher had already begun his lesson．He told the teacher why he was late．He was then praised for what he had done．

点评 写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，明确要点．2、注意将叙述、描写等手法结合到议论中，为议论提供依据．3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．