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14.You want your essay to be the one that is passed around the admissions office-or not.It's a little bit like the difference between being famous and infamous.
We all know that a truthful,well-written essay that shows how the student has matured is sometimes shared among admissions staffers.(36)ESo how do you make your essay famous instead of infamous?
Here are some basic tips to avoid that infamous essay:
●Avoid the generic(概括的)and get specific.Don't write that you're"fully-developed"or that"many people have impacted"you.(37)G
●Don't repeat information that is elsewhere in your application.(38)D It is important for  the student to use every opportunity to show who they are and impress the admissions office.
●(39)C If you have gone through difficult circumstances,you should share your story.But don't blame others.It's important to show perseverance(毅力).A better essay will talk about how you have dealt with and overcome the obstacles you came across.
●Don't talk about rankings.Many students love focusing on the numbers when they are writing their"why this college"essay.(40)A Obviously schools are aware of their rankings.They want to know why you want to attend.

A.They believe they are praising the college by mentioning the fact that the college is highly ranked.
B.It also shows the reader that you are thinking about his or her appreciation of your writing.
C.Don't complain.
D.For example,it is not necessary to share your participation level in your essay.
E.But I'm guessing that there are a lot more essays that produce laughter and gasps of"not again".
F.Don't try to cover everything in an essay.
G.Tell the reader what you've done,how you've been influenced,and by whom.

分析 本文属于说明文阅读,作者通过这篇文章主要向我们描述了怎样写出能够通过招生办的文章,首先要避免广泛要写的具体,并且不要重复信息;其次,不要抱怨,显示毅力很重要;最后写作时不谈学校排名,多写自己想要参加的原因.

解答 36.E.推理判断题.根据后文"So how do you make your essay famous instead of infamous",你如何使你的文章不是臭名昭著的呢,可知前文应为 但是我猜有很多的文章使人大笑,在心里想着不要再有这样的了;故选E.
37.G.推理判断题.根据前文"Avoid the generic and get specific",避免笼统要写的具体,前文已讲过笼统的内容,因此这里应是对具体的描述,即告诉读者你做了什么,你是如何受到影响的,受到谁的影响;故选G.
38.D.推理判断题.根据前文"Don't repeat information that is elsewhere in your application",不要重复信息,在您的应用程序的地方,应为它是没有必要在你的文章分享你的参与水平;故选D.
39.C.推理判断题.根据后文"But don't blame others.It's important to show perseverance",但是,不要怪别人.显示毅力很重要,可知应为不要抱怨;故选C.
40.A.推理判断题.根据后文"Obviously schools are aware of their rankings",很明显,学校清楚他们的排名;因此应为 他们相信他们提到该学院是高度排名的事实是赞扬学院;故选A.

点评 考察学生的推理判断能力和联系上下文的能力,在做推理判断题不要以个人的主观想象代替文章的事实,要根据文章事实进行合乎逻辑的推理判断.此类的填空题一定要联系上下文,根据上下文的内容加上自己的理解,再作出正确的判断.

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