Question

【题目】假如你是高一学生李华，你的美国笔友 Mike 本学期来华当交流生(exchange student)，他感觉与同学用汉语交流很费劲。请你根据以下要点给他写一封建议信，帮助他快速提高汉语水平，同时，你也希望得到 Mike 给你英语学习的建议。

要点如下：

1.你的建议。

2.希望得到 Mike 学习英语的建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mike,

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

Learning that you had difficulty in communicating in Chinese as an exchange student, I’m writing to offer you some advice.

First, it would be better if you can follow some famous TV programs like News Report in CCTV 1 to correct your pronunciation. Besides, I consider it effective to keep a diary in Chinese every day so that you can enlarge your vocabulary and get familiar with grammar. Most importantly, seize every opportunity to practice it, such as talking with native Chinese speakers, holding debates and singing Chinese songs? After all, practice makes perfect.

To be honest, I am also faced with some difficulties in learning English. Would you mind giving me some tips on it? That would be appreciated. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是高一学生李华，你的美国笔友 Mike 本学期来华当交流生(exchange student)，他感觉与同学用汉语交流很费劲。请你根据以下要点给他写一封建议信，帮助他快速提高汉语水平，同时，你也希望得到 Mike 给你英语学习的建议。要点如下：1.你的建议。2.希望得到 Mike 学习英语的建议。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】本文段落清晰，结构严谨，句中运用高级词汇、词组和高级句子。Learning that you had difficulty in communicating in Chinese as an exchange student,句中使用了宾语从句；First, it would be better if you can follow some famous TV programs like News Report in CCTV 1 to correct your pronunciation.条件状语从句用语句中；Besides, I consider it effective to keep a diary in Chinese every day so that you can enlarge your vocabulary and get familiar with grammar.目的状语从句和宾语从句完美结合；such as talking with native Chinese speakers, holding debates and singing Chinese songs?现在分词做结果状语；After all, practice makes perfect.巧妙使用谚语；To be honest, I am also faced with some difficulties in learning English.独立成分的运用堪称经典；另外，First, Besides, Most importantly, To be honest,的出现为文章增色添彩。