Question

【题目】最近，你班就“90后的成长”话题进行了一项社会调查，调查显示，人们对“90后”青少年的现状褒贬不一。请根据以下要点用英语写一篇文章，介绍调查结果，并谈谈你自己作为一名“90后”的感想。

优点	缺点	你自己的感想
1. 思想独立、有志向…… 2. 乐于接受并尝试新事物…… 3. 自信、热情…… 4. 珍惜友情，善于交流……	1. 依赖性强…… 2. 心理抗挫能力不足…… 3. 缺乏责任感…… 4. 自控力差……	(至少两点)

注意：1. 对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2. 词数120左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3. 参考词汇：挫折frustration

4. 文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

Recently our class has conducted a survey about 'The growth of post-90’s generation'. People have different opinions on it.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently our class has conducted a survey about “The growth of post-90’s generation”. People have different opinions on it.

Some people think that the post-90’s generation are confident, ambitious and independent in thinking. They are fond of new things, ready to accept and try them. What’s more, they have many new ideas, which makes them more creative. It's especially worth mentioning that they are enthusiastic and caring. They treasure friendship and are good at communicating with others.

However, others argue that the post-90’s generation are too self-centered and dependent on their parents in life or teachers in study. They tend to live a comfortable life but are less able to overcome frustration. Besides, some of them lack the sense of responsibility and don't know how to show gratitude to others. Worse still, many are so weak in controlling themselves that they are often addicted to the Internet.

As a member of them, I think we post-90’s generation should be aware of our own strengths and weaknesses, so that we can put emphasis on perfecting ourselves. Only in this way can we gain respect and faith from others.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇图表类作文，社会上对90后的成长现状褒贬不一，为此该班作了一次社会调查，总结了几个主要的优点和缺点，且要求考生在最后要发表自己的感想。为此写作前，一定要把握这三个要点，理解要点里要表达的内容，列好提纲，不能遗漏任何要点。要求中给出的要点比较具体,所以表达起来较为容易；除此之外。写作时要注意时态的准确运用，上下文要连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要灵活多变。

【亮点说明】

范文正确地表达了作文的要点，而且中心突出，观点明确、言简意赅；除此之外，还较准确地运用了一些词组：如have different opinions on sth在某事上有不同观点；be fond of sth喜欢某物；It is worth doing sth值得做某事；be good at 擅长于；tend to do倾向于干某事； lack the sense of responsibility 缺乏责任感；be addicted to对…上瘾等。好的句式：如They are fond of new things, ready to accept and try them. What’s more, they have many new ideas, which makes them more creative.What’s more更甚者，插入语表递进，which引导非限制性定语从句修饰前面的先行词new ideas；Worse still, many are so weak in controlling themselves that they are often addicted to the Internet. 考查结构so…that…如此…以至于…that后是结果状语从句； Only in this way can we gain respect and faith from others. Only位于句首后跟状语，引导部分倒装。