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18.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
As the saying goes,chance favored the prepared mind.I learned this from one of my experience.
I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school.Because of this,I decided to give up play volleyball.Luckily,my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure.After that,I practiced playing volleyball on every day.When another tryout arrived,I was full prepared and tried my best.As a result,I was selected and became an important player on our school team.
From this,I am firmly convincing that we are able to seize a chance as long as I get well prepared.

分析 俗语说,机会是给有准备的人准备的.我从我的经历之一了解到了这个道理.
我因为没有入选校队而决定放弃打篮球,我的朋友阻止了我,他说其实是我的懒惰和缺乏准备而造成的这次失败.从此我努力练习,最终加入了校队.

解答 As the saying goes,chance favored the prepared mind.I learned this from one of my experience
I was not chosen as∧member of the volleyball team of our school.Because of this,I decided to give up playvolleyball.Luckily,my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure.After that,I practiced playing volleyball on every day.When another chance of trying out arrived,I was fullprepared and tried my best.As a result,I was selected and became an important player on our school team.
From this,I am firmly convincing that we are able to seize a chance as long as I get well prepared.
解析:
1.favored--favors.考查谓语动词的时态.根据从句As the saying goes可知本句说明的是一般的道理,所以谓语动词用一般现在时态,因此用favors.
2.experience--experiences.考查名词.根据句义表示"我从我的经历之一了解到了这个道理",所以本句的experience表示"经历",是可数名词,根据one of 可知用复数experiences.
3.as后加a.考查冠词.根据I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team 可知应该用a修饰可数名词
member,表示"我没有能够成为校队的一个成员".
4.play--playing.考查非谓语动词.give up 用doing做宾语,所以用playing.
5.but--and.考查连词.my best friend stopped me 表示"我最好的朋友阻止了我",这和后句pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure之间是并列关系,所以用and 连接两句.
6.which--that.考查强调句式.和it was一起构成强调句式,强调主语 my laziness and poor preparation 用that.
7.删去on.考查介词.every day表示"每天",它的前面不用介词,所以删去on.
8.full--fully.考查形容词和副词的区别.修饰动词prepared用副词fully.
9.convincing--convinced.考查派生词.convincing表示"令人相信的";convinced 表示"相信的",本句表示"我相信我们能抓住这个机会",所以用convinced.
10.I--we.考查人称.和主语we呼应用we.

点评 考查短文改错.
时态的错误是短文改错的必考点.看一篇文章,要有一种大局观,要上前下挂,看看上下文的时态是否
一致.例如本题的As the saying goes,chance favored the prepared mind的错误就是这个道理.

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