题目内容
19.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Most of us are fond in traveling,because traveling can bring us a lot of benefits.By traveling they can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different place.We will visit much famous places and taste different delicious foods.Traveling abroad is especially great experience for those who does not have the opportunity to be away from their homeland.We will meet different people and see strangely things when we traveled.It will be not only help us know about customs of other people,but also will help us gain knowledge of the places we visit.In this way,we can understand what differently other people live and arouse(唤起) our deep love for our motherland.
分析 本文讨论的是旅行的好处.
通过旅行我们可以欣赏各地不同的风景,品尝不同的食物.我们会遇见不同的人和事,不仅有助于了解其他人的风俗习惯,还可以增长我们的知识,从而唤起对祖国的爱.
解答 Most of us are fond in traveling,because traveling can bring us a lot of benefits.By traveling they can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different place.We will visit much famous places and taste different delicious foods.Traveling abroad is∧especially great experience for those who does not have the opportunity to be away from their homeland.We will meet different people and see strangely things when we traveled.It will be not only help us know about customs of other people,but also will help us gain knowledge of the places we visit.In this way,we can understand what differently other people live and arouse(唤起) our deep love for our motherland.
解析:
1.in改为of.考查介词.be fond of表示"喜欢".
2.they改为we.考查代词.和Most of us are fond in traveling,because traveling can bring us a lot of benefits.相呼应用we.
3.place改为places.考查名词.因为修饰词 different可知名词用复数.
4.much改为many.考查形容词.修饰可数名词复数famous places用many.much修饰不可数名词.
5.especially great experience 前加an.根据主语Traveling abroad 可知experience表示"经历",是可数名词,所以用an especially great experience 表示"一次特别好的经历".
6.does改为do.考查定语从句.定语从句who does not have the opportunity to be away from their homeland的谓语动词应该和先行词 those 一致,所以不用第三人称单数.
7.strangely改为strange.考查形容词和副词.修饰名词things 用形容词strange.
8.traveled改为travel.考查动词的时态.根据上文可知用一般现在时态表示人们对旅行的看法,所以traveled改为travel.
9.去掉be.考查动词.谓语动词 help 和主语It之间是主动关系,所以去掉be.
10.what改为how.考查引导词.修饰副词differently用how表示"其他人的生活是多么的不同".
点评 考查短文改错.由 how 引导的感叹句,其句子结构也分为三种:
1.可用句型:"How+形容词/副词+主语+谓语!".如:
How careful she is!她多么细心啊!
How fast he runs!他跑得多快啊!
2.可用句型:"How+形容词+a/an+可数名词单数+主语+谓语!".如:
How beautiful a girl she is!她是个多么漂亮的姑娘啊!
3.可用句型:"How+主语+谓语!".如:
How time flies!光阴似箭!
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One day I asked him how he did it.Kevin replied,"Each morning I say to myself,‘Kevin,you have two choices today.You can choose to be in a good mood or in a bad mood.'I choose to be in a good mood.Each time something bad (43)A,I can choose to be a (an)(44)B or to learn from it.I choose to learn from it."
"It isn't that (45)D."I protested.
"Yes it is,"Kevin said."Life is all about(46)A.You choose how you (47)B to situations.You choose to be in a good mood or a bad mood.The(48)A line is:You're your choice how you live life."
Several years later,Kevin was (49)D in a serious accident,(50)Boff 60feet from a communication tower.I saw him when he was (51)C from the hospital with rods placed in his back.I asked him what had (52)B his mind as the accident took place."It was the (53)D of my soon-to-born daughter,"Kevin replied."Then,I remembered I had two choices:I could choose to live or I could choose to die.I chose to live."
"Weren't you scared?"
"The doctors and nurses were great.They kept telling me I was going to be (54)A.But when they (55)D me into the operation room and I saw the expressions on the faces of the doctors and nurses,I got (56)C scared.In their eyes,l read‘He's a(57)B man.'I knew I needed to take action.When one nurse asked me shouting if I was (58)A to anything and waited for my reply,I took a deep breath and yelled,‘Gravity.'
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Kevin lived.I learned from him that every day we have a choice to live (59)D.Attitude is (60)C.
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42A.professor | B.creator | C.operator | D.motivator |
43A.happens | B.disappears | C.enters | D.shows |
44A.winner | B.victim | C.teacher | D.adult |
45A.hard | B.enormous | C.terrible | D.easy |
46A.choices | B.happiness | C.hardship | D.goodness |
47A.adapt | B.react | C.lead | D.turn |
48A.bottom | B.straight | C.waiting | D.limited |
49A.exposed | B.expected | C.evolved | D.involved |
50A.taking | B.falling | C.jumping | D.giving |
51A.carried | B.arrested | C.released | D.protected |
52A.come with | B.gone through | C.put forward | D.pushed into |
53A.health | B.safety | C.education | D.growth |
54A.fine | B.wealthy | C.hurt | D.lost |
55A.supported | B.refused | C.persuaded | D.wheeled |
56A.rarely | B.hardly | C.really | D.similarly |
57A.handsome | B.dead | C.strong | D.energetic |
58A.allergic | B.addicted | C.devoted | D.hopeful |
59A.simply | B.accidentally | C.carefully | D.fully |
60A.something | B.anything | C.everything | D.nothing |