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【题目】书面表达

随着中国经济的发展，私家车日渐增多，很多学生上学都有车接送，为此，同学之间观点不一。请你根据下表中双方不同观点用英语写一篇文章给上海英文星报--Shanghai Star ，介绍这种情况及你对这一现象的看法。

支持	反对
1.省时、方便； 2.安全。	1.拥堵、车祸； 2.易相互攀比。
你的看法……

注意：

1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 词数100左右；

3.文章开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：攀比 vie with …

书面表达

In recent years, more and more students go to school in private cars. People have different opinions about this phenomenon.

Answer 1

【答案】

In recent years, more and more students go to school in private cars. People have different opinions about this phenomenon

Some people favor taking private cars because it is safer and much more time-saving than taking other means of transportation. In this sense, going to school in a private car is more convenient.

However, other people argue that too many private cars will cause traffic jams and even accidents during the rush hour. What’s worse, students tend to vie with each other to show they are from rich families by taking expensive cars.

In my opinion, students may have other options, such as buses, and bicycles. Private cars are surely more convenient, but as a student, I prefer riding a bicycle. By doing so, I won’t do any harm to the environment while improving my health.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是写一篇文章，关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，本文的主题是对很多学生上学都有车接送这一现象表达观点，考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系。灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】学生写作要有灵活性，同时要表现出较好的英语语言表达能力。本文脉络清晰，首先阐述了支持私家车接送的观点，然后阐述反对接送的观点，最后阐述自己的观点，要点齐全，有理有据。文章使用了很好的短语和句子：time-saving节省时间， traffic jams交通堵塞， What’s worse更糟糕的是, tend to趋向， vie with与...比较、竞争， In my opinion在我看来，do harm to 对...造成危害。uIn this sense, going to school in a private car is more convenient.是主语从句，However, other people argue that too many private cars will cause traffic jams是宾语从句，What’s worse, students tend to vie with each other to show they are from rich families by taking expensive cars.句子很出彩。