题目内容
3.Dear Tom,I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others,and you may be often feel lonely.That's why you are new here and people don't know about you.But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advices below.
First,you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters.At the same time,never fail to listening to other people's views.Second,you should learn about your classmates'likes and dislikes.Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people and show them that you are actually very friendly.Last but not least,I will always ready to help you.We can take part in some activities together,when I can introduce you to others.
As time going on,people will know you better and be willing to make friends with you.
Best regards.
Peter.
分析 Tom初来乍到,与其他人交流有困难,Peter对此提出了几点建议,首先要积极参加讨论,提出自己的观点并听取别的意见;其次应该了解同学们的喜好,向同学们展示自己的友好.另外Peter还提出将会与Tom一起参加活动,向别人介绍Tom.
解答 Dear Tom,
I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others,and you may be often feel lonely.That's why you are new here and people don't know about you.But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advices below.
First,you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters.At the same time,never fail to listening to other people's views.Second,you should learn about your classmates'likes and dislikes.Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people and show them that you are actually very friendly.Last but not least,I will always∧ready to help you.We can take part in some activities together,when I can introduce you to others.
As time going on,people will know you better and be willing to make friends with you.
Best regards.
Peter.
详解:
1.have改为is;考查句式结构,这里是There be 句型,故把have改成 is.
2.去掉be;考查句子结构,句中动词feel与情态动词can构成句子的谓语,be动词多余,故去掉.
3.why改为because;考查句意,分析句意为"这是因为你是新来的,人们不了解你",故把why改成 because
4.advices改为advice;考查名词,advice意为"建议",是不可数名词,没有复数形式.
5.a改为an;考查冠词,active part 以元音音素开头,前面用不定冠词an
6.listening改为listen;考查动词,fail to do sth是固定用法,意为"没能做".
7.can改为will;考查情态动词,can和be able to意义重复,不能连用,此处用will帮助构成将来时态,
8.always后加be;考查动词,ready是形容词,前面加上系动词be构成动词短语be ready to do,在句中作谓语.
9.when改为where;考查定语从句,在这个定语从句中缺少地点状语,故把that 改成where,在句中作状语.
10.going改为goes;考查句子结构,As 是连词,后面接从句,所以把going改为goes.
点评 短文改错时首先要掌握短文的中心思想,然后根据上下文语境,分析句式结构,利用所掌握的词汇,语法等基础知识找出错误加以改正.