题目内容
请根据下面提示,使用英语介绍你的家乡的情况。
1.人口约20万,面积约360平方公里。
2 地理情况:坐落在大山的脚下,面临一条大河。新建有许多工厂,商店,医院。
3.教育情况:有10所学校,每个儿童都可以上学生活状况丰富多彩,人们工作之余可以逛商店,看电影,跳舞,参加体育活动等。
写作要求:句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。字数不超过120字。
One possible version
My hometown is at the foot of a mountain, in front of which lies a big river. It has a population of 200,000 and an area of 360 square kilometers. Many factories, shops and hospitals have been built. There are 10 schools in our hometown, where every child can study. People can go shopping, see a film, go dancing and play sports after work, living a colorful and happy life.
【解析】这是一篇说明介绍性写作,要求根据提示介绍家乡的情况,题目已经给定大致内容,写作时要注意适当增加内容,以保证文章的连贯性。文章第一句My hometown is at the foot of a mountain, in front of which lies a big river.中用词组at the foot of a mountain来说明位于山脚,后接which引导的定语从句,in front of倒装至定语从句的句首。第二句It has a population of 200,000 and an area of 360 square kilometers.用人称代词it引导,对村庄的描述具有拟人化效果。第三句采用被动语态进行说明;第四句There are 10 schools in our hometown, where every child can study用where引导定语从句,修饰schools。最后一句People can go shopping, see a film, go dancing and play sports after work, living a colorful and happy life.里living a colorful and happy life做伴随状语从句。总结:写作时对于一些常用的动词,要注意其其他形式以更为简练的表达自己的观点,活用从句增加文章亮点。
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