题目内容
2.假如你是李华,你所在的国际学校打算举行一次为期七天的"走进世界名校"的夏令营活动.请你给美籍校长Roy写一封信申请参加.内容包括:1.你对夏令营活动的了解(参观名校,听教授演讲和交外国朋友等);
2.参加的意愿和理由.
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数.
Dear Mr Roy,
I'm glad to know that you are going to hold a seven-day summer camp called"Walking into the World-famous Campus".I have learned that there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities,attending professors'lectures,making foreign friends and so on,which I think are of great use to us high school students.
I have great interest in it.The reason is that I can gain much knowledge and experience from activities.What's more,it will encourage me to study harder and improve my communication skills.
Thanks for your reading my application.I hope I will have a chance to take part in the activity.I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
分析 这是给美籍校长Roy写一封信,申请参加"走进世界名校"的夏令营活动.根据题目要求可知用第一人称,时态用一般现在时态和一般将来时.内容包括:一对夏令营活动的了解;二参加的意愿和理由;三期盼得到答复.
高分句型:
1.I have learned that there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities,attending professors'lectures,making foreign friends and so on,which I think are of great use to us high school students.句子里 that 引导宾语从句there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities,attending professors'lectures,making foreign friends and so on;which引导非限制性定语从句,代指前面there are 结构;I think 是插入语;of great use=useful.
我已经了解到,夏令营里有各种各样精彩的活动,例如参观名校,听教授演讲和交外国朋友等,我认为这些活动对我们高中生有很大的用处.
2.The reason is that I can gain much knowledge and experience from activities句子里that 引导表语从句;gain much knowledge and experience 比赛"获得知识和经验".
原因是我能够从活动里获得知识和经验.
解答 Dear Mr Roy,
I'm glad to know that you are going to hold a seven-day summer camp called"Walking into the World-famous Campus".I have learned that there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities,attending professors'lectures,making foreign friends and so on,which I think are of great use to us high school students.【高分句型一】(对夏令营活动的了解)
I have great interest in it.The reason is that I can gain much knowledge and experience from activities.【高分句型二】What's more,it will encourage me to study harder and improve my communication skills.(参加的意愿和理由)
Thanks for your reading my application.I hope I will have a chance to take part in the activity.I'm looking forward to your early reply.(期盼得到答复)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 考查提纲类作文.
写作中,要注意 抓住提示的信息,并注意进行适当发挥. 表达中要注意确定句子的时态与语态,注 意句式结构的正确和变化多样,适当运用 短语、并列句、复合句、介词短语和副词 等,以使文章饱满.
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