Question

2．假如你是李华，你所在的国际学校打算举行一次为期七天的"走进世界名校"的夏令营活动．请你给美籍校长Roy写一封信申请参加．内容包括：
1．你对夏令营活动的了解（参观名校，听教授演讲和交外国朋友等）；
2．参加的意愿和理由．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Mr Roy，
I'm glad to know that you are going to hold a seven-day summer camp called"Walking into the World-famous Campus"．I have learned that there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities，attending professors'lectures，making foreign friends and so on，which I think are of great use to us high school students．
I have great interest in it．The reason is that I can gain much knowledge and experience from activities．What's more，it will encourage me to study harder and improve my communication skills．
Thanks for your reading my application．I hope I will have a chance to take part in the activity．I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是给美籍校长Roy写一封信，申请参加"走进世界名校"的夏令营活动．根据题目要求可知用第一人称，时态用一般现在时态和一般将来时．内容包括：一对夏令营活动的了解；二参加的意愿和理由；三期盼得到答复．
高分句型：
1．I have learned that there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities，attending professors'lectures，making foreign friends and so on，which I think are of great use to us high school students．句子里 that 引导宾语从句there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities，attending professors'lectures，making foreign friends and so on；which引导非限制性定语从句，代指前面there are 结构；I think 是插入语；of great use=useful．
我已经了解到，夏令营里有各种各样精彩的活动，例如参观名校，听教授演讲和交外国朋友等，我认为这些活动对我们高中生有很大的用处．
2．The reason is that I can gain much knowledge and experience from activities句子里that 引导表语从句；gain much knowledge and experience 比赛"获得知识和经验"．
原因是我能够从活动里获得知识和经验．

解答 Dear Mr Roy，
     I'm glad to know that you are going to hold a seven-day summer camp called"Walking into the World-famous Campus"．I have learned that there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities，attending professors'lectures，making foreign friends and so on，which I think are of great use to us high school students．【高分句型一】（对夏令营活动的了解）
I have great interest in it．The reason is that I can gain much knowledge and experience from activities．【高分句型二】What's more，it will encourage me to study harder and improve my communication skills．（参加的意愿和理由）
Thanks for your reading my application．I hope I will have a chance to take part in the activity．I'm looking forward to your early reply．（期盼得到答复）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作中，要注意 抓住提示的信息，并注意进行适当发挥． 表达中要注意确定句子的时态与语态，注 意句式结构的正确和变化多样，适当运用 短语、并列句、复合句、介词短语和副词 等，以使文章饱满．