Question

15．假如你叫李华，最近你的美国笔友Tony要来北京体验中国传统文化，请根据他的问题回复邮件，为他设计北京一日游活动，帮助他体验中国传统文化．请描述你们打算去的地方、具体的活动安排、以及这样安排的理由．

Hi!Tony，
I'm glad that you will come to Beijing soon．There are lots of places of interest in Beijing【高分句型一】．In order to experience traditional Chinese culture better，I do recommend BeijingHutong tour．
First，we're going to go sightseeing along the lanes in Hutong．The houses in Hutong are traditional，such as Siheyuan．From them，you can imagine how people used to live．Of course you can stop anywhere you like and it is interesting to take pictures or have a close look．Second，we are going to pay visits to a Hutong family．We can have lunch there and have a short talk with the local residents，which can help you learn about many stories of the past．We can not only appreciate the dramaticchanges that Hutong has undergone，but also see evidence of the history of Beijing，experience the old way of life and experience traditional Beijing culture．
In a word，Hutongs are the homes of common people in the past．It is easy to know how people lived and had fun in the old days【高分句型二】．So it is a good choice to learn about traditional Chinese culture．
I'm looking forward to your coming．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本次作文为提纲类作文，要求根据Tony的问题回复邮件，为他设计北京一日游活动，帮助他体验中国传统文化．请描述你们打算去的地方、具体的活动安排、以及这样安排的理由．写作提纲已经列出，要求明确，故要完成写作任务，务必把各提纲所要求的内容表达清楚．
【高分句型一】There are lots of places of interest in Beijing．北京有许多名胜古迹．place of interest 名胜古迹
【高分句型二】It is easy to know how people lived and had fun in the old days．很容易了解过去人们是如何生活并开心度日的．句式：It's+形容词+to do sth．做某事…

解答 Hi，Tony!
        I'm glad that you will come to Beijing soon． There are lots of places of interest in Beijing【高分句型一】．In order to experience traditional Chinese culture better，I do recommend BeijingHutong tour．
       First，we're going to go sightseeing along the lanes in Hutong．The houses in Hutong are traditional，such as Siheyuan．From them，you can imagine how people used to live．Of course you can stop anywhere you like and it is interesting to take pictures or have a close look．Second，we are going to pay visits to a Hutong family．We can have lunch there and have a short talk with the local residents，which can help you learn about many stories of the past．We can not only appreciate the dramaticchanges that Hutong has undergone，but also see evidence of the history of Beijing，experience the old way of life and experience traditional Beijing culture．
       In a word，Hutongs are the homes of common people in the past．It is easy to know how people lived and had fun in the old days【高分句型二】．So it is a good choice to learn about traditional Chinese culture．
       I'm looking forward to your coming．
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．