Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，你的美国朋友Peter想了解目前你校中学生吸烟的问题，请根据下面给的要点提示，以smoking为话题，写一篇短文。

大部分中学生认为吸烟很酷

吸烟有害健康，特别对是对肺的伤害，能导致很多疾病。

为了自己和他人的健康，请戒烟

注意：

1.字数: 100 左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】There are many students smoking in senior high school, the reason may be that they think they look cool or appear to be more mature while having a cigarette at hand.But there are a lot of reasons not to smoke. Smoking does harm to our health.It is dangerous to our heart and lung. A lot of diseases are caused by cigarettes.Cigarettes also have terrible smell.The secondhand smoke can also be dangerous to the others who stand around you. Therefore, no smoking in public is a strict regulation in many countries. And the most important thing is that once you come into addictive,it's hard to get rid of it. So,we must keep far from the cigarette——for everybody's health.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。你的美国朋友Peter想了解目前你校中学生吸烟的问题。内容主要包括：1. 大部分中学生认为吸烟很酷；2.吸烟有害健康，特别是对肺的伤害，能导致很多疾病；3.为了自己和他人的健康，请戒烟。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，要求我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】

本文内容精炼，句子衔接紧密，文中使用高级句子。There are many students smoking in senior high school,现在分词做后置定语；the reason may be that they think they look cool or appear to be more mature while having a cigarette at hand. the reason做主语后面的表语从句用that引导；The secondhand smoke can also be dangerous to the others who stand around you.who引导定语从句；另外，But，while having，does harm to，Therefore,等的使用为文章增色添彩。