Question

【题目】假如你是高一新生李华。开学之初, 你的英语老师Mr. Wang希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给他写一封信，

1. 对英语学习的认识；

2. 目前你的英语学习现状及存在问题；

3. 对英语教学的建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Mr. Wang,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Wang,

I am very pleased to have you as our English teacher.

As we know, nowadays English is widely used in the modern world. More and more people are hot for learning English, which shows English is playing an important part in our daily life.

My English is not very good and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me some good advice on how to memorize new words. Besides, would you please give us more chances to practice speaking English? I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是高一新生李华。开学之初, 你的英语老师Mr. Wang希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给他写一封信，1. 对英语学习的认识；2. 目前你的英语学习现状及存在问题；3. 对英语教学的建议。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be hot for (热衷于)；play an important part in (发挥重要作用)；by heart(牢记)；memorize (记住)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。