假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:(1)．每处错误及其修改均仅限一� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

题目内容

19．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Young people have different attitude towards music．As we all known，most people throughout the world love music．Anyway，nowadays young people have begun to show enthusiasm for pop stars．Many young people have a greatly passion for different kinds of pop music．They buy CDs and to download songs from the Internet．They enjoy the excitement pop music bring，and try to convey their own ideas in pop music．
As far as I concerned，we cannot deny that pop music is an essential part of our life．However，follow pop music blind should be discouraged．That we should do is to take a more critical attitude towards the pursuit of pop music．

分析文章大意：本文主要讲了对流行音乐的态度．我们都知道，全世界的人都喜欢音乐．然而，现在的年轻人开始对明星表现出很大的热情．许多年轻人对不同的流行音乐表现出极大的热情．他们买CD或者从网上下载音乐．他们喜欢流行音乐给他们带来的兴奋．然而，盲目得喜欢流行音乐应该被阻止．我们应该做的是对流行音乐的追求有一个更加批判的态度．

解答 Young people have different attitude towards music．As we all known，most people throughout the world love music．
                                          attitudes                                       know
Anyway，nowadays young people have begun to show enthusiasm for pop stars．Many young people have a greatly passion
However                                                                                                                                                 great
for different kinds of pop music．They buy CDs and to download songs from the Internet．They enjoy the excitement pop music bring，
                                                                            去掉                                                                                                         brings
and try to convey their own ideas in pop music．

As far as I∧concerned，we cannot deny that pop music is an essential part of our life．However，follow pop music blind should
               am            As far as I∧concerned                                                                                                              following            blindly
be discouraged．That we should do is to take a more critical attitude towards the pursuit of pop music．
                        What
1．attitude→attitudes 考查名词单复数．attitude是可数名词，前面有different修饰，所以用复数形式．
2．known→know 考查谓语动词形式．本句是主动语态，所以用know而不是known．
3．Anyway→However 考查副词．前后两句之间的关系是转折关系，又有逗号隔开，所以用however．
4．greatly→great 考查形容词．本句是修饰名词，所以要用形容词的形式．
5．删除to 考查动词形式．句中的download和前面的buy应该是并列关系，所以应该用动词原形，不需要to．
6．bring→brings 考查主谓一致．主语是pop music，所以谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式．
7．I后加am 考查谓语动词．As far as I am concerned是固定句式，意思是"我认为"．
8．follow→following 考查非谓语动词．本句需要用动名词作主语．
9．blind→blindly 考查副词．修饰动词短语，所以要用副词形式．
10．That→What 考查名词性从句．该句中含有主语从句．从句中缺少宾语，所以用what．

点评改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．