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【题目】某中学生英语报社拟成立微笑俱乐部,现征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为“I Want To Smile”的英语短文。请依据下面提示用英语写一篇短文。

内容要点:

1.微笑的优点。

2.想对其微笑的人物(父母)以及理由。

3.对自己微笑的理由。

注意:1. 词数100左右。

2. 短文必须包含全部的内容要点。要求观点明确,结构合理,行文连贯。

I Want To Smile

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【答案】I want to smile

There are many advantages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible

First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up. They arrange almost everything for me. With their help, I have made great progress. I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.
In a word, let’s greet every day with a smile. Tomorrow is another day.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较简略,故动笔前要认真阅读材料,组织写作内容,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。写作中注意从三个方面进行叙述,首先介绍微笑的优点,然后介绍想对其微笑的人物(父母)以及理由,最后介绍对自己微笑的理由。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时态,注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。该题型主要考查学生的语言表达能力,在写作中根据所给提示和语言信息,不遗漏要点,可以适当发挥。做到表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯。

亮点说明:范文使用了一些重要的语法知识:条件状语从句If we smile at life…;状语从句的省略…whenever and wherever possible;原因状语从句…because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up.;倒装句式…only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.等,语法知识使用得当,叙事清晰;同时范文还使用了很多固定短语not only…but also…;in return;bring me up;made great progress;In a word等,使作文内容更加充实;范文注意使用so,First,Then,In a wordA等来衔接句子和段落,表示事情发生的时间顺序,使作文更有条理,做到了行文连贯,表达更加生动。

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A.Bottled water was once drunk both by the rich and the poor.

B.Bottled water sales have risen,for it’s cheaper than tap water.

C.Europeans believed in the power of treatment of mineral water.

D.Americans have had the habit of drinking bottled water for long.

【2】People prefer bottled water because________.

A.it does good to their health

B.it has chlorine to make it taste good

C.it contains no mineral pollution at all

D.it’s a practice originated with the Romans

【3】The underlined word “contaminants” most probably means________.

A.pollutants B.microorganisms

C.chemicals D.minerals

【4】Which of the following could be the best title for the passage?

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A. using computers is a waste of resource

B. many people don’t turn off the computers after using them

C. computers are to make electricity

D. a computer is not a must for working

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A. we are short of paper B. the printing is not important

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