题目内容
【题目】你校英语外籍教师Emesto and Stasi暑假期间准备在本地开一家西餐小店,要招若干名高中生为无酬打工人员。下面是招聘启事:
Wanted!
4 middle school students
Do service work and act as translators
Healthy and helpful
Contact:wfpub@gmail.com
假定你叫李华,愿意应聘。请写封电子邮件,介绍自己,并说明你愿意应聘的理由。词数110左右。开头已写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Emesto and Stasi,
I happened to have read your advertisement and decide to apply for the job.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Emesto and Stasi,
I happened to have read your advertisement and decide to apply for the job. I’m a student of Senior Ⅲ from Wuhan.I’ve been very interested in English and intend to enter a foreign language college after I graduate from high school. I shall be free during the summer vocation,so I decide to find something interesting to do and I think that’s the very thing I like.
Though I shall get no pay for the job,I’ll be able to get some valuable job experience as well as practise my spoken English by acting as a translator for you. Besides,I’m so strong and healthy,and I really enjoy making friends with others,especially communicating with foreigners.
I’ll greatly appreciate it if I’m offered the chance,and I’m sure I can be of great help for you.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语apply for申请;be interested in 对。。感兴趣;graduate from从。。毕业;make friends with 与。。交朋友;I decide to find something interesting to do and I think that’s the very thing I like.这个句子I like 做the very thing的定语从句,省略关系代词that;I’ll greatly appreciate it if I’m offered the chance,and I’m sure I can be of great help for you这个句子it做形式宾语,真正的宾语是后面if引导的从句,还运用be of +名词的这种结构;