Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你们班来自美国的交换生Peter最近在学校举办的最美中国散文大赛中没有获奖而情绪低落，请你根据所给提示用英语给他写一封电子邮件，要点包括：

1．表示同情；

2．给予安慰；

表达祝愿。

注意：1.词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 散文：prose

Dear Peter,

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Yours faithfully

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Johnson,

I feel deeply sorry to hear that you failed to win an award of the Most Beautiful Prose Contest held in our school ,which made you so depressed. It doesn’t matter .

I know you are a big fan of our Chinese literature ,particularly taking pleasure in the famous proses written by famous prosers and writers, such as BaJin,LaoShe , CaoYu and so on. I had ever the same experience as you have. Just as the famous saying goes , “ Failure is the mother of success.” The more you practice ,the better you will be. Don’t lose heart and never give up . I sincerely hope you are sure to achieve your dream with much effort.

If I can be of any help , please don’t hesitate to let me know . Please remember nothing can stop you to make your dream come true once you make up your mind to do it !

Best wishes to you .

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

这篇书面表达属于应用类作文，是一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你们班来自美国的交换生Peter最近在学校举办的最美中国散文大赛中没有获奖而情绪低落，请你根据所给提示用英语给他写一封电子邮件。人称为第一人称，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：fail to未能，depressed沮丧的，fan迷，Failure is the mother of success.失败乃成功之母，the + 比较级，the + 比较级，越…越，lose heart失去信心，give up放弃，sincerely真诚地，achieve实现，hesitate犹豫，come true实现。make up one’s mind下定决心。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。